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0 posted 2002-09-12 03:31 PM



I'm not a teen but oh what fun!
to be First Post, a Number One!
Now when the teens come in they'll see
a poem by an old fogey!

LOL...

have fun!


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-12-2002 03:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-12 03:35 PM


LOL sorrybut this made me laugh so hard, i think my hubby thinks i have lost my mind lol

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*
             soon to be mother    

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2 posted 2002-09-12 03:56 PM


LOL!!!!

Another old fogey joining you.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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3 posted 2002-09-12 04:17 PM


*me gets his brush out* "Get up your own end" *grins*...

This is a brilliant way to start teen 6 off, hopefully it can progress in the same spirit of happiness and good will.

Andrew

"I still feel the pain in my heart, what once was pure is now diluted" - Biffy Cylro

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4 posted 2002-09-12 05:15 PM


Is this the old fogey party???

OH...Somebody put on some Clarence Carter--

Let's LINE DANCE!!!

ROFL

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5 posted 2002-09-12 05:43 PM


How about a dance to one of my faves...
Strangers in the Night?  I know you and I
remember that one....  An old fogey?
You know that makes me one too....

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6 posted 2002-09-12 06:04 PM


D...do I know you people?
Do I know
MYSELF?!?!?!

.m.

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7 posted 2002-09-12 07:42 PM


I'll have you know I don't feel old,
so what if I'm in my years of gold?
"They" say "all that glitters isn't gold,
Well who are "they" to be so bold?

I may not be a teen but I ain't dead yet,
survived my teens, dated and wed.
I raised a family together and alone,
and like them, I'm always on the phone.

I've been told I tire a lot of teenagers out,
whenever I take groups of them here and about.
I'm still a girl in her teens at heart,
This old fogey's said her piece and will depart.

(sorry rushed, have the grandkids here but had to respond) some bad da dum there LOL

These kids are our future and I love them!

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8 posted 2002-09-12 07:55 PM


You know what I think the difference between fogeys and teenagers is? Fogeys know themselves. I could be wrong, but then, I always am. lol

Kielo

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9 posted 2002-09-12 07:58 PM


Some fogeys are not only cute, and sophisticated...but they are also wise...like you Sunshine....

You are number one!  

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10 posted 2002-09-12 08:18 PM


The strangest thing I've ever seen!
All this to have a post in Teen???
Those second childhoods must be fun
To drive you to be Number One!
Get back to fogeyland with me
Or you'll be grounded, Karilea!!

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11 posted 2002-09-12 08:32 PM



Well all right then, I’m done with play
And back to open, right away!
But the teens were such delights
That Sun shall come back soon to write!


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12 posted 2002-09-12 08:33 PM


Old,not us, I must refuse
but laughs like this, can always use.

Sandra

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13 posted 2002-09-12 09:20 PM


A fogey? You? Never!! Impossible!!  You could never be a fogey. You're too young and  funky! This is where I exit, and hope that this atmosphere continues for as long as Teen 6 is here Thank you for doing this Sunshine

(by the way, I'm a broke college student... )

University is good for the eyes and the lips. ;)

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14 posted 2002-09-12 09:25 PM


Okay...everyone who isn't a teen...
Get in a line....and let's dance!!


WOOOHOOO!!!

Party on down!!
  



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15 posted 2002-09-12 09:39 PM


Hey, I'm a legal adult in BC, so that includes me, right?
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16 posted 2002-09-12 10:42 PM


Sunshine,
Did somebody say PARTY!!! 'Cause this old grandpa loves to PARTY


If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (09-12-2002 10:44 PM).]

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17 posted 2002-09-13 02:01 AM


Teenager enters...sees old people... gets confused then


..........GeTs a broom and shoos them away........PARTIES OVER lol

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18 posted 2002-09-13 02:04 AM


*takes broom away* Hey! Leave the fogeys alone! Fogeys are cool! They're a heck of a lot smarter than I am, anyway.

Kielo

I LOVE YOU! *kisses you* hehehe...

[This message has been edited by Kielo (09-13-2002 02:05 AM).]

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19 posted 2002-09-13 02:06 AM


HEY!

Gimme back that broom!!!

How am I supposed to get home for Goddess sake?


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20 posted 2002-09-13 02:13 AM


*blushes* oops. Sorry. *gives it back* I was just trying to help. You don't need to yell...
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21 posted 2002-09-13 02:14 AM


(Kielo is just so cool...)

now...just place my broom in my reserved parking spot. It's the one with this sign:

"This spot is reserved for witches only.
All others will be toad."

*chortle*

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-13-2002 02:15 AM).]

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22 posted 2002-09-13 02:16 AM


(*warm, fuzzy feeling* Thanks! *is flattered*)

*looks at the sign nervously* Um... *backs away slowly* I never touched it, I swear!

[This message has been edited by Kielo (09-13-2002 02:24 AM).]

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23 posted 2002-09-13 05:11 AM



Oh man!  I missed the party!
Oh well, that's ok because I'm with Andrew
and Rhonda.  I think we need to keep the 'party'
going in Teen #6.

Thanks for starting things off on the right foot, Karilea.  



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-13-2002 05:15 AM).]

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24 posted 2002-09-13 06:43 AM


Old fogey you are surely not,
I'm shocked Miss Karilea!
If "you" are old, then "I" am too …
And I refuse to be!

My aches and pains … I hide them well,
My wrinkles (well, they show),
But deep inside the heart of me,
I'm still 16, you know.

Have fun in the new Teen #6 Forum everyone!  

Best wishes and hugs to all ...
/Kit

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25 posted 2002-09-13 10:15 AM



I'm only old because my kids
refuse to let me be!
Young as them I crawl around
with my grandkids, see?

I love my age, I wouldn't change!
I've earned my wrinkles, all!
But the secret, I must confess,
is to believe in fairies small...

Believe in all that can be seen
and all that can't, well there!
That's when the magic really starts,
and in magic, the key word, is share!

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26 posted 2002-09-13 10:29 AM


You're not old, Miss Karilea,
I must come to your defense.
You'll always be a sweet 16,
With many years experience.

Your words are reassuring,
Your insights are very deep.
Your innocense is quite alluring
In these secret thoughts I keep... oops

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27 posted 2002-09-13 11:56 AM


*chuckles at everyone*

*sees dancing baby*

AHHHHH! Run!!! I hate that thing!

Sincerely,
Titus


"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (09-13-2002 11:56 AM).]

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28 posted 2002-09-13 12:05 PM


Starts doing the cha-cha..LMAO haha I'm always the last to find out that there's a party goin on..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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29 posted 2002-09-13 12:13 PM


*dances with Ceinwyn* Um... what dance are we doing? LOL
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30 posted 2002-09-13 12:43 PM


Man, this feels like home!!
Florida is chock full of Old bats--ummm I mean, the "youth challanged". hehe just kidding...ya'all are welcome anytime, just get rid of that dancing baby...

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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31 posted 2002-09-13 01:24 PM


Okie who SPIKED THE KOOLAIDE!

Kristen


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-13-2002 01:25 PM).]

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32 posted 2002-09-13 05:12 PM


what's goin on with this world

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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33 posted 2002-09-13 11:01 PM


It was ME!!! Mwahaha!

--Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

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34 posted 2002-09-14 08:12 AM



ROTFLMBO...you folks are something else!

Seems to me that when a fogey
comes in with some hokey-pokey
everyone just stands around
awaiting for this act of clown

but when I click and disappear
then the laughter reappears
for every time I turn my back
this pops up with teenage flack!

*PooF*

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35 posted 2002-09-14 04:08 PM


Sen? What did you do to me?!
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36 posted 2002-09-14 04:13 PM


geez....sorry, lovie, thought you'd read the sign...


just a sec...

Allakazamkerchoo!





UH OH. Lori is going to pulverize me!!!

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37 posted 2002-09-14 04:24 PM


Hmmm....(consulting book of shadows)

"What was done,
now, undo...
Begone this girl!
return to YOU..."



WHEW...

That was kinda awkward for a bit...

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38 posted 2002-09-14 04:48 PM


HEEEEEY!

My hair's longer than that.

Mike

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39 posted 2002-09-14 04:51 PM


sorry. heh..



You SHOULD be grateful tho...If you weren't a nice guy, I woulda left ya that way for month, as in monthly cycle

if ya know what I mean!


There, there now, the hair will grow back...

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40 posted 2002-09-14 05:35 PM


So what's the punishment?

Mike the hemogoblin

...who will now shut up

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41 posted 2002-09-14 06:08 PM



tsk...



I now crown thee King of the Old Fogey Party!





My work here is done..."This house is clean..."


sigh.

(serenity takes her broom and goes home...)

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42 posted 2002-09-14 06:35 PM


LOL *giggles* Maybe old fogeys aren't so smart after all. I'm still me...
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43 posted 2002-09-15 01:07 AM


What is this?
A party for old foggy's "surely you jest"
Sunshine you are the best of the best.
  Paul

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44 posted 2002-09-15 06:37 AM



To all the "adults" who came in here,
thanks so much for your good cheer,
but the broom's been used, we're swept away,
it's time to let the Teens come play!

Their writing has so far to go
I'm proud they raise their voices so!
I waited till I was "old" to pen
my voice openly, and then

I sit back and watch in amaze
as the young come through the haze
and I admire their spirited ways
and wish them health, and better days...

for their voices shall be heard,
and on this, you have my word.

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45 posted 2002-09-15 12:31 PM


hehehe thats precious
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46 posted 2002-09-16 01:08 AM


Nicely done, Sunshine.  It's good to see you omni-replying in this forum.  I'm thinking of whipping myself back into shape and taking a crack at the old lifestyle again, myself.  

It's said that teens are better seen,
than ever truly heard;
But anyone can speak aloud,
within the written word.

So pen yourselves, pubescent men
Oh chant, young ladies fair!
For truth is best a beacon for
All people, everywhere.

Our haven, where we congregate,
is clear for all to see.
So come and speak to these blue walls
your passion's poetry.

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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47 posted 2002-09-18 06:53 AM



Well its about time that all returned
to the land where poetry's learned..[ouch]
to where the brightest pens turn pages blue
and warmth of heart lives, for you, and you...

where poetry is for all ages,
young and old, our learned sages
where wisdom is shared around the world
and nations flags are flown, unfurled...

where we may pluck a heart-string's song
and know that all of us belong
where rules are simple, all is free
and we may write our poetry...

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48 posted 2002-10-20 09:17 PM


ahhh....older people....


Thanks for this Sunshine...nice to see you Openers here in Teen


Are you scared?                BOO! Are you now?

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49 posted 2002-10-20 09:33 PM


it's good to see you in our neck of the woods.

care to come back and visit every once in a while?

/jen/

to give pleasure to a single heart by a single act is better than a thousand heads bowing in prayer.  [ghandi]

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50 posted 2002-10-20 09:34 PM


::enviously wishing she could have a two pager too::

can you teach me how?  heh.

/jen/

to give pleasure to a single heart by a single act is better than a thousand heads bowing in prayer.  [ghandi]

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51 posted 2002-10-20 10:37 PM


No
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52 posted 2002-10-20 11:38 PM


Is this thread still here? I thought we killed it already. *shrugs* Hurray for old people! May they live forever! Or maybe not, because then they would be really old. I wonder if its possible to be that old and not be bitter. Anyway, I'm done rambling and wasting people's valuable time now. BYE!

Kielo

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53 posted 2002-10-20 11:50 PM


jav, you're evil.

don't make me transform into my 'alterego'!!

[you know the one].

muhahahahaha!!

::evil laugh::

oh wait, we can be evil together!!  you can be a cat too!!



/jen/

to give pleasure to a single heart by a single act is better than a thousand heads bowing in prayer.  [ghandi]

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