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Open Poetry #22

To Whom It May Concern

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-11 08:11 AM

I really don’t care,
What you do with shattered life,
Just existing there
Poking arms with needle knife
In the comfort dark
Out there where the dregs do hide,
But stay in the park
When you take your drug high ride,
Not my alleyway,
Don’t climb my fence to escape,
Please stay away
When your own mind you self rape.
Why should I find you
Sprawled in mud puddles mindless,
When it’s what you do,
In existence of blindness;
Make me to make calls
To service of the city
To remove your fall
I no longer have pity
To those that don’t learn,
So I waste no more of breath
To Whom It May Concern, Death.

Gloom
this didn't actually happen to me,
but a neighbor

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-10-11 08:19 AM

grim fact.... well written

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-11 08:36 AM

Truly a sad state of affairs. You have a way of shedding light on some pretty dark topics--but this is a good thing. Brings attention to things that shouldn't be ignored or dismissed without notice.

You presented this unpleasant scenario, in a very effective manner.

~ May the light of day, light your way, through all the paths in life ~

EA

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