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Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
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Kent England

0 posted 2002-10-11 03:17 AM





When whispers dance, my threadbare sky
And all the world – does pass me by;
I lean toward the golden hue,
and warm my face with thoughts of you.
Content to rest within the view.


An easy tear? I shall not cry!
Nor drain such sorrow from my eye,
I shall encase myself in blue;
When whispers dance.

But somewhere in the root of I,
Where passion goes to quietly die;
The seed of love we proudly grew,
vast vines of strength in all things true.
Take my hand ~ Once more we’ll fly!
When whispers dance.

S-G-K © 03/09/2002

© Copyright 2002 Samantha G Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 323
the winds of destiny
1 posted 2002-10-11 06:24 AM


Perfectly lovely!
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

2 posted 2002-10-11 07:52 AM


Whispers enchants. Enjoyed.
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2002-10-11 08:31 AM


Samantha I loved this piece of work, I read it a few times and will again.

Much enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

When whispers dance, I’ll take your hand
And with your touch then understand
How moments they can come to be
When whispers dance from you to me


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-10-11 08:37 AM


Samantha..this is so perfectly beautiful...
Awesome work...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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