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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-11 02:02 AM


Girl Stop

Girl stop teasing me.
You know I can't sleep
in the same bed with
you and not want too.
Girl stop saying I can't
sample what I touch and see.
Girl you've got some hot equipment
that's irresistable to me.
I see what I like and I
like what I see so girl
stop teasing me.
Girl we'll get along a
whole lot better if you'll
just do what I say.
Put on your sexiest
red silk lingerie
and let me have
my way.

JamesLee
Oct11
2002

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Suetang
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1 posted 2002-10-11 02:50 AM


Hello James

This was so very sensual and so very romantic....I loved it!

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-11 04:26 AM




(sigh) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, this is a beautifully demanding poem of passion, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-11 08:48 AM


(chuckling) Uh huh... and being an independent thinker she asked you to put on the nightie and she'd think about it...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-10-23 05:41 AM


Thank you Sue and Noah and Cpat...
Sometimes you just have to come right out and ask for exactly what you want...she can always say no...but why should she...James

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-30 03:08 PM


oooooo, me likes this one too much!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-05-04 01:36 AM


Thanks passing shadows for the kind words...James
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