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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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0 posted 2002-10-10 10:05 PM




Remember
the togetherness,
the tender, touching moments
so sweet,
the feeling all was right
in the world?
You, a couple united into one,
conquering all the world
had to offer.
And yet somehow,
during that challenge you grew
apart in the building
and recognition of your ownselves.
Shockingly, you came to realize
that your individual needs
varied to complex extremes,
leading to the dissolution
of what you both
had cherished so much.
At the height of sorrow, and
of finally accepting
lost love, you wonder why?
What good can such
a loss bring?
Although knowing the answers
will be disclosed in time,
that thought just doesn't
lessen the grief now.
How sad life seems during
these painful moments.


without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-10 10:10 PM


I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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