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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-10 06:16 PM


(From the viewpoint of my friend Mark. He is the one that actually just expeirenced this.)

While mowing the lawn
I ran through spider webs
I was like yuck
Let my friend check
For creepy, crawling critters
I run for the house
Pound on the door
My friend opens up
And I beg her to check
For the 8legged critter
That might have gotten on me
She looked me over
Then she said no
So I went back to work
And mowed the grass some more

Cold hands means a warm heart

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-10-10 10:18 PM


ewwwwwww..I know the feeling. I hate that. You just know there is a spider crawling on you somewhere when that happens. This is cute, and creepy, and crawly.
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
2 posted 2002-10-10 10:46 PM


This is cute, Julie...
Maybe you should re-post it for Halloween...
~ hugs and creepies

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-10-10 11:44 PM




(shivers) Oh my gosh, I know that feeling so well and I don't like that either, it reminds me of when I was in Scotland Yard with my family and we all saw rats scurrying about the silent streets and then a tree branch brushed against her ankle and she thought it was a rat and she leaped in a scare! This is wonderfully creepy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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