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Marge Tindal
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MarganagraM
~*Marge Tindal*~


Lay of day with sun in shine
Comes in sweet passage of time
Drapes the meadow in yellow divine
Sparkled rays repeat over the pine

Dances the water in undulated play
Cloaked in shadows of the silhouetted bay
Frothy churn stirs ships in turn
The rays of sun do brightly burn

~*~*~*~

(Sun in lay with shine of day)
(Passage of time comes in sweet)
(Divine yellow drapes in the meadow)
(Over the pine, sparkled rays repeat)

(Undulated, the water dances in play)
(Cloaked in silhouetted shadows of the bay)
(Ships in turn stir frothy churn)
(Brightly the rays of sun do burn)


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 10-10-2002 04:31 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Margie girl darling sister of my soul this is exquisite and I love it truly. YOU are one amazing writer, YOU know I love it don't you? Mmmmm of course

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 10-10-2002 04:57 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Marge you tickle my fancy with this
(with this you tickle my fancy Marge.)

couldn't help myself.....
Loved it hon.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

the_loner_23
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3 posted 10-10-2002 04:59 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

I love this write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Betty
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I love the way you wrote this Marge.
Love ya,
Betty
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 10-10-2002 05:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MarshaLove~
LOL !  I had such FUN with this little piece ... waiting for you girls to arrive I put this thought to pad ... and got so tickled when it materialized for me~

GentleSpirit~
LOL @ 'couldn't help myself'~
That's EXACTLY what I felt when I grabbed the title out in the yard !
Thanks, gal~

LonerGal~
Thanks so much, hon~

BettyBuddy~
You just gotta know I love you to pieces !
(I'm making some progress with the injuries, waiting for the MRI to be scheduled)

Hey, think if my doctor prescribes 'patient poetry' I can get Cracker Barrel's risk management carrier to cover the cost of publishing ?

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 10-10-2002 07:17 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Dear Marge:  How clever and colorful!  Much enjoyed!

Betty Lou Hebert

Titia Geertman
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Wrote it while waiting for those girls did you? Knowing you and knowing how late they came in, you probably wrote a whole bunch of them LOL

It's just beautiful Marge.

Hugs, wish I could have been there too, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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8 posted 10-10-2002 07:53 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Wow Marge! This is wonderful.
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Listening to every heart


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Whole lot of reasons to enjoy this one!
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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Love this Margie girl!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


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Marge - my dear you are simply magical...

BC
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A Mountain Paradise


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Truly, truly and totally amazing! Now I have to admit, it took me a few reads to figure this out, but once I did, I sat here wondering how on earth you came up with this concept. There must have been some magic in the air the day you wrote it.

Hugs and congratulations on another fabulous piece of writing.  Marti
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Marge you are simply a magic girl.....I love the clever presentation and the flow is wonderful.

"Undulated, the water dances in play)
(Cloaked in silhouetted shadows of the bay)"

Oh if that ain't peaceful then I don't know what is!
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the winds of destiny


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This is so cute.  I love it.
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 10-11-2002 09:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ya' know .... sometimes you have NO EARTHLY IDEA why a thought comes ... and yet you 'joy' in the fact that it did~
This is definitely one of 'those' times .. so, in retrospect ... I owe the gals a BIG THANK YOU for taking a wrong turn !

(fess up time ... when MarganagraM came to me ... I had to look up 'anagram' to be sure I could say what it wanted me to say ... Whew ... thank goodness it was okay !)

an·a·gram - n.
A word or phrase formed by reordering the letters of another word or phrase


***Thanks, everyone~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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To wit, to woo!

You never cease to amaze me! You play with words like no other!

EA
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Very creative, Marge! Well done!
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(Ships in turn stir frothy churn)
(Brightly the rays of sun do burn)


Absolutamundo!
You are an artiste!
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 11-28-2003 10:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


Thanking a certain friend <))>< for reminding me of this one today~

Soooooo fun to have done ... and thank you ALL for the kindness of your replies~

I need to head for the sandbox and see what drifts through my fingered thoughts~

Thankee lady~
*Huglets*
~*Me*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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