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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2002-10-10 04:10 PM


Quite clear among this gathering of voices sounds the spirits' tone,
the timbre of those notes are such that often I hear them alone.
The words become a minor chord unto the message they contain,
a variation on a theme which echoes hope as its' refrain.

Of note, within this symphony of souls and all that they desire,
is that the song remains as if by rote upon a plane much higher.
A composition greater than the sum of all it's seperate parts,
collectively to coalesce into one vision born of art.

I see its' beauty taking form replete in pure simplicity,
the calm in a poetic storm of unrehearsed humanity.

© Copyright 2002 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-10 04:12 PM


yes it is humanity we see here and in all words written is it not?

enjoyed!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-10-10 04:14 PM


I could just about interpret this one in notation!!!

(jumping up and down in m'chair)

except of course, I would have my own method of madness for interpretation...

which is SO precisely your point...

dang.

total admiration here.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-10-10 04:17 PM


library!


garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-10 04:22 PM


William, what beautiful and true words. You said it so well. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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