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Open Poetry #22

Don't Leave My Bungalow

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-10-10 03:38 PM

Big breasted ballooning belles
Burgeon bouncing boyancies!
Buffers buffed....
O bulky bulbs!

Brimming in my Bungalow.

Luscious Lucies tips of light
As limpid as the lilies....
Lissome ladies linger long
Leave my lowly thoughts aloft

Brimming in my Bungalow

Frailty are your bosomed frames
True forms that found their freedom.
Fabulous your fabrics made
May they never ever fade

Brimming in my Bungalow

I found you with your fringes fraught
And framed with flaunt and flourish.

You flustered me into a flush
So please don't ever try as much
As to leave my Bungalow

You flustered me into a flush
So please don't ever try as much
As to leave my Bungalow.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-10-2002 11:18 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-10-10 04:13 PM

interesting play on sounds..and has a nosensical feel to the play on words. Yet... there seems more underneath as if in mocking... always enjoy the verse that makes me look...and think.

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-10-11 01:43 AM

Hi!
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thanks for the feedback!

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