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Cabin Dreams |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Let winter snow come heavily laden, I have plenty of fire wood ready, My pantry is stocked from the gardens yield, There are new warm quilts and sheets of cotton, The windows caulked when the nights get windy When blowing across the now fallow field. Winter can come I’m patiently waiting, I’ve lamp oil and fragrant candles plenty, Now won’t you come share what my dreams have filled Gloom for someone special |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your "someone special" is very fortunate indeed... this is lovely, and very inviting... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
your dreams are beautiful |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful this poem is Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I DO love this! Sounds like a nice cozy cabin.  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now Professor!! Who could pass up such a romantic invitation? Enjoyed this. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love cabins with fireplaces and plenty of wood to keep one warm. Nice write Proff. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This sounds sooooo inviting. If she doesn't show up, count me in! EA |
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someonespecial Junior Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 10 |
I am someonespecial, although may not be yours. In Winter's play, I love the day when snow piles all the more. By fireside, the warmth of two, in sharing nature's gift, We need not starve as love fulfills and comforts through night's drift. And watching through the windows frost to view the soft decor, I may not be your special one, but it's you, whom I adore.... [This message has been edited by someonespecial (10-10-2002 04:59 PM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, sunshine, My someone special is part of the dream Thank you, 1slick_lady, Nice to share dreams with someone that enjoys them Thank you, the_loner_23 Your words of praise are kind Thank you, Auguste A cozy cabin dream, yes, Glad you liked it. Thank you, Nightshade, Most people wouldn’t want to slow down to the pace Give up so much, not realizing how they’ll find Pleased you liked this. Thank you, Gentle Spirit Wood is one way to keep warm, The important thing is the keep warm and To keep dreaming, a pleasure to me that you liked this. Thank you, Earth Angel, Being in Canada, I guess you are used to heavy snows Harsh winters and being snowbound, just a dream to me That at times seems close to perfection, Thanks for the offer You are kind and a pleasure in response. Thank you, someonespecial For the wonderful poetic reply In winter’s playground of snowfalls sound And the wind makes ripples on snowy ground, Frosted window from breath in shadows Four eyes watch the moonlight on the meadow As the gentle dear cautiously come near As we from beneath one quilt do peer. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful dreaming.... and I love the line you wrote later something like..... moonlight on the meadow.. so beautiful ~~ Connie ~~ |
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