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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-10 11:15 AM




Tough love,
You use it,
and others
'get tough'
with you.
But, if you
don't sieze
the opportunity
of perhaps,
helping to
save a soul
You are worse
than if you
hadn't lived at all.
Tough love,
hard to give,
and hard to take.
But, imperative
no matter the
price you have to pay!

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-10 03:02 PM


Awesome words

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-10 03:18 PM


Sometimes tough love is the only thing that works.  Nice work!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-10 03:51 PM




(big hugggssssss) I understand what you mean, sweet friend, I wish we could all give openly without restrictions but sometimes we can't help but be demanding and tougher! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-10 04:19 PM


Pat, this was very good work, as is everthing of yours I've read. Thanks for sharing.
With Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-10 04:27 PM


excellent! how much heartache would have been avoided if I had understood this years ago..you hit it on the mark with this..thanks, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-10-10 08:33 PM


Noah, Ethel, loner23...thanks.

Auguste, yes that is so right, sadly.

CSK - Cher, am glad for your opinion. I actually wrote this on-line for in my personal life I was angry at someone today, and needed to express my opinion of such; I rarely talk of personal life, but, most do, huh?
thanks

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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