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Open Poetry #22

Thursday Morning Serial Haikuing

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-10 10:01 AM

Light rain is falling,
Sidewalks are just moist right now,
Puddles yet to come.

Hidden sun rising,
Brightening the sky somehow,
Rain’s rivulets run.

Grey clouds are swarming,
Crying on pedestrians
Crossing open ground.

The day’s not warming,
Chilling walkers emotions,
Sky tears on the ground.

Heavy storm calling,
In the thunder’s vibrations,
Echoes city streets.

Walkways now clearing
Into shelters people plow,
Vacating wet streets.

Gloom

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-10 10:06 AM

Superbly vivid! Well done Prof!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-10 10:19 AM

very description, fun to read.

warmly,
Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-10-10 10:42 AM

Professor,
You write very well this is excellent.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 2002-10-10 05:47 PM

You "Haiku" very well! Great job!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-10-11 07:30 AM

Thank you, VAS
For the kind words

Thank you, regards2you,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Seymour Tabin,
Glad you liked my words

Thank you, Munda,
It’s an easy form, but I do enjoy it
Especially when others enjoy the efforts

Gloom

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