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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-10 03:09 AM


Highway Sixty Nine Revisited

You have a way of pissing me off.
A reputation for treating me wrong.
I get so mad at you but I can't
stay mad for too long.
No body is perfect and that
sure goes double for you.
But you're all I've got and
I'm not looking for anyone new.
Seems like everytime I try to leave
I find myself on Highway Sixty Nine
revisiting you.

JamesLee
Oct08
2002

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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1 posted 2002-10-10 05:24 AM


Cool!
Enjoyed the read!

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-10-10 08:17 AM


understand all too well....

good stuff !

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-10-10 08:22 AM


It's kind of like getting hit by a truck and just getting hurt a little isn't it?....Good write
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-10 08:27 AM


JamesMichael, I loved this work. i also like the way you didn't give up on the subject in your poem. Thanks.

With Love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-10-2002 08:28 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-10-10 05:00 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is a powerfully heartfelt write, sweet friend, I hope now you have found that special someone that remains close by your side, this is well expressed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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