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Munda
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0 posted 2002-10-10 02:19 AM


The Hermit

Quite safely in his fortress - hiding from the worldly pain -
The hermit looks upon mankind and shakes his head in shame.
He wonders how he came to be the recluse he is now,
A man who left the world behind to find his peace somehow.

"They call me strange, they call me weird, but I am satisfied
With everything I learned thus far, life kept me occupied.
I lived my life at fullest - I've known happiness and pain -
I walked in brightest sunshine and I conquered heavy rain.

But now I feel compelled to speak some words to humankind,
'Cause something has gone wrong with us - this world is most unkind!
How come some live in carton boxes out there on the street?
And why can't people see they're suffocating with their greed?

Too few still care for human kind - too many lie and steal
And many children in despair just need our love to heal.
Our hearts are filled with gloominess, instead of joy and pride,
But we can change this if you like - no longer run and hide.

Respect and kindness are the keys to make the darkness run;
To aim a smile at people so much better than a gun.
A sandwich shared much tastier than dinner on your own;
With love and laughter in your heart you'll never walk alone.

The stars shine like a beacon bright, a guide for all to see,
From up above, a dazzling light, awaiting you and me;
And yet two sparks don't make a flame, but we can surely try,
By joining hands and reaching out - illuminate the sky!"

Quite safely in his fortress - hiding from the worldly pain -
The hermit looks upon mankind and shakes his head in shame.
"I'll take responsibility to change a hopeless plight
And leave my solitary to turn sparks into a light!"

Munda

[This message has been edited by Munda (10-10-2002 02:20 AM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-10-10 03:26 AM


Good thoughts...James
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2 posted 2002-10-10 12:42 PM


Lessons that we could learn from some who listen and see better than they look to us.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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3 posted 2002-10-10 12:48 PM


I'll join hands with you to illuminate the sky!
This is an impressive piece of writing, full of wisdom and caring. I love where you are coming from and can identify with so many of the thoughts and feelings you express.

EA

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4 posted 2002-10-10 02:49 PM


Munda, this is such a good work . I can tell it's coming from your heart. That makes it more special to me. I wish that more people in our world would not only  SEE  these situations, but would all  "JOIN  HANDS" to make an effort to do something to make things better. Thanks for sharing your heart.


With Love And Best Wishes to All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-10 03:11 PM


Munda, here's my hand.   Wonderfully written with many good thoughts.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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6 posted 2002-10-10 04:17 PM


"Quite safely in his fortress - hiding from the worldly pain -
The hermit looks upon mankind and shakes his head in shame.
"I'll take responsibility to change a hopeless plight
And leave my solitary to turn sparks into a light!"




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful! I too admire all those who step up and do the best they can for the less fortunate amidst a cruel society filled with so many homeless and deprived! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Munda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nan
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7 posted 2002-10-10 07:47 PM


I think that many a poet can relate to your hermit, Munda - This is a great write..
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8 posted 2002-10-11 01:56 AM


Respect and kindness are the keys to make the darkness run;
To aim a smile at people so much better than a gun.

How very very true!
Thanks for sharing!
God Bless!

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9 posted 2002-10-11 04:12 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies.
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