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Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
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0 posted 2002-10-09 11:43 PM



Will you hold me?
Please,
just this once.
I feel so alone, you see.
I have this need,
a craving,
a burning desire.
I need to be loved.
So just this once,
could you hold me and pretend
that you cared?
Pretend that I matter,
pretend that I have not been hurt.

Will you hold me?
Please...
Just this once.

Kielo

© Copyright 2002 Jeremiah Leonard - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-09 11:49 PM


I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-10-10 02:49 AM


Enjoyed...James
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-10-10 08:20 AM


terrible feeling to want and need to e held and no one to do it... nicely written my friend... hope indeed when you are held it is for more than just once
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-10 08:35 AM


Kielo, you write so well. I hope you will get held more than just once. Thanks for sharing.


Best Wishes and love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-10-10 09:19 AM


Kielo,
If he doesn't I will, enjoyed.

Kielo
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6 posted 2002-10-10 08:39 PM


Thanks guys!

Seymour? It isn't about a guy, per say. But you can hold me anyway.

Kielo

I need to change my signature. :D

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