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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-10-10 07:49 AM



So I just said to her:
"How upset would you get
If I came over there
and slept with you?"
(She slept over there)

She said:
"You mean just sleep?"
I said: "Well, perhaps
I'd better not-
I kick alot in my sleep."

I rolled over
proceeded to kick
the hell out of my bedsheets
for about ten minutes.
God I was happy when I fell asleep.

© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-10-10 08:08 AM


(chuckling).... you know... I enjoy the sense of humor you bring to the pages and the clever writes.
Now, be careful kicking them sheets...because we never seem to forget if we have the sheet kicked out of us...

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-10 08:28 AM


You kick a lot?!?---Aye, there's the rub!

--You almost had me! tehe

EA

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3 posted 2002-10-10 08:32 AM


Toerag, you are hilarious. I like the way you bring the laughter out of people....in your poetry and your comments to others. Thanks for sharing your sense of humor in such a poetic way.


With Love to All,
Ethel/garysgirl

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-10-10 08:33 AM


Toe,
In other words you were covered and full of sheet. Enjoyed

suthern
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5 posted 2002-10-10 08:58 AM


Ask me this question
I'm sure you'd guess
My answer would be
A simple yes. *S*
Just to hear you breathe
Would give such joy
And if you wanted more...
Yee-HA!!! Oh, boy!!!!

Yammean those bedsheets could survive 10 minutes of YOUR kicking??? LOL You must buy fine linens, sweets. *G*

I like this very much, Toe... *S*

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-10-10 10:10 AM


Are you on a roll with  your funny poems, or have I just been missing them?  Hope you make this a morning occurance...it makes my day..

enjoyed!

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-10-2002 10:38 AM).]

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7 posted 2002-10-10 10:20 AM


ToeMan~
LOL @ our Suthern's reply~
Oh me ... Oh my !

Careful now ... she might just kick the sheet out of you~

Hi SuthernGal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2002-10-10 10:47 AM



I'm always too late at the fun part
Suthern beat me to it

LOL

Titia

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9 posted 2002-10-10 04:30 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Toerag, you always bring such laughter to these pages, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, I LOVE IT, sheet happens, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

someonespecial
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10 posted 2002-10-10 05:06 PM


It's delightful to read your words...they bring a smile to someone's face.
Toerag
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11 posted 2002-10-10 05:11 PM


Thanks to all of you very nice folks for the very kind replies....Glad ya got a kick out of it!!
Munda
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12 posted 2002-10-10 05:54 PM


Passions wouldn't be half as much fun without you!
Magnus
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13 posted 2002-10-10 05:55 PM


Yes,  we got a kick out of it...and I was
prepared to say..."NO WAY JOSE"...you
certainly can NOT sleep with me....

Toerag
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14 posted 2002-10-10 06:04 PM


Yea Maggie...I heard you were a whiner and a moaner about people who kick in bed...LOL...have a great evening
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15 posted 2002-10-10 08:04 PM


Spoken like a true sheet-kicker, Mr. Toe!
Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-10-10 09:19 PM


OH SHEET, Mr.Toe.......
I don't know how we would get along without your humor...
Thanks for the cheer and the sheet!
~ lots and lots of laughing hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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17 posted 2002-10-10 09:35 PM


All I can say is, it's a good thing that you wear rags around your toes, Toerag, otherwise you'd rip the sheets to shreds. rolf......rolf. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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18 posted 2002-10-10 09:47 PM


Do you snore???
*I'll think about it*

Cute write Toe..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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19 posted 2002-10-10 10:52 PM


Toerag - my, my, just sleep with her hey?

BC

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