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LiviEden
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since 2002-10-03
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In the Mist

0 posted 2002-10-09 12:43 PM



I freefall into pieces
Getting closer to numb
When I'm completely broken
This pain will be all done

The dance will never end, if it hasn't yet started.

© Copyright 2002 Randi Sears - All Rights Reserved
RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2002-10-09 12:59 PM


I enjoy short poems like this that pack a lot into them. Bob
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-10-09 01:17 PM


Awesome words spoken here

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-10-09 02:24 PM



I do believe writers, and especially your type of writer, are far more resilient than the words you leave for us here.  I am looking forward to more of your pen, please...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-09-2002 02:25 PM).]

Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-10-10 12:54 PM


this one needs a bump.
Nice array of words!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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