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VAS
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0 posted 2002-10-09 09:47 AM


morning’s silhouettes

morning’s silhouettes
stand
against a backdrop
of crimson, azure

tatted leaves
form lacy fronds
from blackened limbs

fowl flit
in rhythmic waves
steeples
spire crosses
adoring the heavens

utility poles
echo their praise
east and west
against the grays
that form
from sun’s sweet rise

a golden glimmer
rises
dousing the stars
from sight
as dawning brings
and end to
night

while
silhouettes
slowly capture
color for the day

time to pray


©October9, 2002


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.


[This message has been edited by VAS (10-09-2002 09:50 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-10-09 09:51 AM



So very quiet, this...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-10-09 09:55 AM


VAS,
As good a write as I've read today.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-09 10:49 AM


To be read in a moment of silence--and awe!

EA

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-10-10 03:05 AM


Lovely...James
scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2002-10-10 08:40 AM


Ah yes...time to pray...to express our thanks for yet another day...great presentation...and the images leapt from the screen at me...
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6 posted 2002-10-10 08:45 AM


Vas, this is very good. You painted your thoughts so very well. Thanks for sharing the morning.

With Love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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