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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-09 07:50 AM



The View


Mists of sea foam spray
In a never ending kiss
Total devotion

Calm sea reflecting the sun
A mirror image
Symbol of love unbroken

Ignoring the view
I only have eyes for you
My oceanic Sun

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2002-10-09 07:57 AM


I enjoyed this
Since I’m in an ocean mood today,
The ocean is a feeling where you can ignore it’s view
But still be swept up with sensations

Gloom

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
2 posted 2002-10-09 08:05 AM


Yep the ocean is a very powerful force..I love it and never tire of it.
thanks for your kind comments
aloha, Cher


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (10-10-2002 04:13 PM).]

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-09 09:20 AM


Cheryl, I love the water, too.....ocean, Gulf Of Mexico, Rivers, Creeks,  Lakes, etc. They are all great inspiration. Also the sun, with it's bright rays, great warmth, beautiful sunsets and sunrises. Thanks for the picture you painted in my minds's eye. I enjoy your work.


Love And Best Wishes To All,
Ethel

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4 posted 2002-10-09 11:15 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love the ocean so so much and watching the sun glow over the water, the colors are enchanting! (kiss on cheek) This is magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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5 posted 2002-10-09 11:18 AM


This blends so well together!!
Wonderful write!!!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2002-10-09 11:28 AM


Cher, that's the kind of view I want! Mind you, my lake is very pretty! I was actually referring to your "oceanic sun"!

Lovely as usual!

Linda

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-10-10 02:41 AM


Very nice Cheryl...James
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