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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-08 10:30 PM


“ADAPTING TO YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Words would be
to whisper yet
they are not enough
for one of such
beauty, feel the
touch of gentle
fingers that sigh
upon your skin
unraveling the
mysteries of a heart
that beats with
wanting of closeness,
know of me, as I
cover you with
softness and of
words you will hear
and to not forget
that say of the
nearness and the
adapting to you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-08 10:31 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-10-08 10:34 PM


Wopnderful romantic write Bill...
Much enjoyed...yes...much.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-08 10:39 PM




(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I believe to adapt to a loved one so well isn the most beautiful feeling of all, almost as though youn can walk around in their skin and know what she is thinking, feeling, like an ESP! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-08 10:39 PM


Adapt away! Sounds good to me! You certainly know how to be mighty charming with your come hither words of love dear troubador!
I'll give it an A plus!

EA

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5 posted 2002-10-08 10:44 PM


Bill~

I love how you weave tenderness and romance into your words, they really allow the reader to be swept away....hugsss

Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2002-10-08 10:45 PM


swoonnnnnnnnnnnnn
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-10-08 11:02 PM


the_loner_23 - thank you much, I appreciate the reply...

Enchantress - I'm glad you liked this write, it was a pleasure writing it...

Noah - I always love your very warm replies to my writings...

Earth Angel - thank you for stopping by this evening. Your replies fill me with desire to write more...

Greeneyes - your words are also of much tenderness and romance. I enjoy your writings very much. A duet perhaps, if you will...

1slick_lady - write on dear one, write words as you do. Very inspiring...



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