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Sundown |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Hand me down, I'm tired and worn The day has been too long Sundial shadows pass me by What, twice? I must be wrong My flock awaits their night time count It's now long overdue Collapsing into slumber's arms Thankful this day is through Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, every long day's work deserves a nice long rest! (big hugggssssss) I know how you feel, sweet friend, this is wonderfully expressed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Kris!! Much enjoyed tonight! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Sundial passes me by, what twice...?" "My flock await their night time count" --these lines are so clever! Sounds like you deserve a nice long sleep! Linda |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
a beautiful, solemn write. I really enjoyed it!  *Krista Knutson* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
good night |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugsssss.....I too am thankful.....wonderful words to end the night.... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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