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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-10-08 01:01 PM


Inside
{rambling again....}


Sometimes thoughts            race
so fast through the silence
and the mind              can't see
what message  lies within.


                    Inside

{please, slow down}

I shake it off
try to                 focus
yet still the images
are to              dim.

{please, let me see}

Thoughts               steam ahead
on a run away train
on tracks                 leading nowhere.

{please, help me search}

Slow down,
ease into the         safety zone
             of self.

{breathe deep     again}



If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-08-2002 01:02 PM).]

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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-10-08 01:08 PM


Hi, Donna! Did you just take a peek inside my head and write about all the fleeting thoughts that are trying to coalesce into something worthwhile saying or writing about?

If so, you have portrayed it very well! LOL

Linda

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2 posted 2002-10-08 01:24 PM




(sigh) Oh Donna, I know this feeling ever so much, sweet friend, I have so many thoughts go through me like planes arriving and departing from an airport and I'm like "I bessech you, slow down!" LOL! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet firend, you always have such precious thoughts to share, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-10-08 02:13 PM


"Slow down,
ease into the         safety zone
             of self."

Donna, what a cool line!


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By the sea
4 posted 2002-10-08 04:23 PM


I understand this very well.     Nice work, Donna!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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