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Silver Blue Whispers

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


0 posted 10-08-2002 09:02 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark Bohannan


Silver Blue Whispers

Silver blue whispers beckoning passions dance
Laced in copper swirls of spirit adorned caress
Spring blossom smiles cascade in gentle trance
Quenching my hearts desire with loving finesse

Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss
Warming this heart within your silken entwine
Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss
Resting in tranquil gazes ... as two souls align

Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze
Reveal corridors of harmony in romantic array
Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze
Recline in comfort against our songs of today

Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew
Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose
Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you
Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows

Mark Christopher


Sorry for my absence of late but life has a way of turning hours into minutes.  I will be in soon to catch up a bit more than I am able to today.

If time were taken from the heart of man then we would have no way to measure the pain of love

© Copyright 2002 Mark Bohannan - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 10-08-2002 09:08 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I thought I'd jump in here before the line formed...

and yes, shaman poet sir, you do weave magick within your lines...and making it look easy and flow so fluidly is a sign of artistry---and someday, I will learn how to write this delicately and leave an impact. Once again you hit me over the head with a cottonball bat.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 10-08-2002 09:09 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Drop by any time, Mark,
as long as you leave lovelies like this...
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 10-08-2002 09:23 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Yes, we need to read more from you..
We miss you when you're away...
This is absolutely beautiful.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise


4 posted 10-08-2002 09:25 AM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

I enjoyed this so much. The title really grabbed me and pulled me in to beautiful thoughts and words.

Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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with you


5 posted 10-08-2002 10:20 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss
Warming this heart within your silken entwine
Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss
Resting in tranquil gazes ... as two souls align "


*sigh*
Mark, so wonderful to read your poetry again
now I have the added pleasure of seeing you too!
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lost in blue pages


6 posted 10-08-2002 10:44 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

another gem from your hand....enjoyed it a lot Mark

((hugs))
Charisma
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7 posted 10-08-2002 10:57 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Mark,
This is so lovely.
My heart heard music in your
words.
They started out
in a soft whisper and
developed into a much louder
voice.
I really hope to
hear more of your "music".
Thanks so much for
sharing.
With Love From Ethel.......garysgirl
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City of Roses


8 posted 10-08-2002 11:12 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

"Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze
Reveal corridors of harmony in romantic array
Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze
Recline in comfort against our songs of today"




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Mark, your beautiful words have been so dearly missed, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all and I wish for these crystal lyrics to shine with all the facets of the heavens of pure love inside you always! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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9 posted 10-08-2002 11:14 AM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This is a very beautiful piece

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-08-2002 11:26 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mark,
Missed you pal, your writing is always a delight to read and I try not to miss any.
JM said she had a wonderful time and I am grateful to you for that. Sy
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


11 posted 10-08-2002 12:13 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I enjoy your writing and pearls of wisdom emensely. I was pleased to see that you had posted today. I am always looking for your work.

You speak softly in "Silver Blue Whispers"---but not only do I hear what you are saying--I listen.

Earth Angel
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Gaia


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Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze
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Beautiful!
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Deep in the heart


13 posted 10-08-2002 12:27 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

A 1derful write!

Nice kitty ... you must introduce it to Toerag

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 10-08-2002 01:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

HiMarkB~
So nice to see you back with a morsel of delight~

'Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you
Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows'


Yes ... you would seek and find the 'blessings'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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15 posted 10-08-2002 01:09 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Mark anytime that you drop by and grace us with beauty as this it is appreciated.  This is one of your most beautiful writes from your heart pen that I have ever had the pleasure to read........just lovely sir poet.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

brian madden
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Mark, so many beautiful lines, this is very tender. WOnderful read.

El riesgo vive siempre!

BloomingRose
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Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew
Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose
Golden blessings cradle all my thoughts of you
Inspired by this tenderness your heart bestows
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Of course I had to get in line with the rest to tell you how wonderfully gorgeous this is. It's difficult for me to choose a favorite, but this one especially touched me today.
May God richly bless you!

Deb
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Island in Paradise


18 posted 10-08-2002 06:17 PM       View Profile for CSKpoet   Email CSKpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSKpoet

It is always a joy to be blessed with your presence and your way with words. This was soft and tender love...It is another of your gems to dazzle us.
aloha and peace to your day, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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19 posted 10-08-2002 11:50 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Silver blue whispers beckoning passions dance
Laced in copper swirls of spirit adorned caress
===================================
Drapes of freckled embrace render healing bliss
=============================
Palm to palm unite carries breeze of spirit kiss
==============================
Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze
============================
Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze

Each sunrise cleansed in kiss of morning dew
Purified in awakened stretch of blooming rose
================================
Well well-- lookie who got his identity back LOL
Are you sure those are your cookies????? heh

Actually I think they are mine...and that this is my post
NO? oh well I had to try...but no one would believe me anyway...this is classic MC poetry...the rhyme divine, cadence kissed,
and with that imagery and personification that is your trademark...


Silver blue whispers

Laced in copper swirls

Drapes of freckled embrace

Sapphire passages traced in emerald fixed daze

Crystal lyrics reflected within prisms of amaze

my oh my....how lovely are those images....
Noooppers...no one could get away with taking credit for this gem of pen...so I wont even try...my mothy job is to worship it properly. Another romantic beauty Mark...
we will take ya what ever time you have...and with whatever cookies


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20 posted 10-09-2002 02:53 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Well silver blue is my favorite color actually and I prefer whispering to reading out loud, and as I whispered this poem, trust me this is the first time in years I wish someone was whispering it to me, (but then I snapped back to reality). However, I have to say I loved the flow, the cadence, and of course, the perfection of this beautiful piece.  Thank you Mark.

Howdy Neighbour
        
    Sharon  

VAS
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21 posted 10-09-2002 09:37 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

lovely words, impeccable rhyme
glad you're here, though short time

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


22 posted 10-09-2002 02:24 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

serenity - Thank you much hun and as for the cotton ball bat....hhhmmmm isn't that the prelude to something more fun.......................you know, pillow fights.  

Sunshine-thank u for the invite

Enchantress-Thank you so much for those words and I do miss being here as well.

Marti-Then I must make sure my titles always grab you.  Thank you dearly

SEA-So wonderful to have you here to read it as well.  Thank you

Charisma-It always puts a smile on my face to know that you enjoyed one of my works.  Thank you dearly my sweet friend.

Ethel- Those are some mighty generous words and I thank you much for that.

Noah-One cannot help but smile when they are graced with your wonderful replies and I thank you very much kind sir.


the_loner_23- Thank you dearly for the beautiful

Sy- It is nice to be missed now and then and I do thank you for your always kind words.  As for the JM thing.......would not have had it any other way ..... nope not all.


Earth Angel-It please me that you are listening and I thank you for your wonderful comments.

Midnitesun-Thank you much.

Interloper-Well thank you and I will see what I can do about the introduction lol.

Marge-Isn't that what leads us halfway home anyway?  Thank you dearly my friend.

Donna- For you to say that means the world to me and I do hope you know that.  Thank you so very much and God Bless.

Brian-Well thank you kind sir and it is always my thrill to receive a comment from a poet of your caliber.

Deb-As long as at least one verse or line touched you then how could I not be elated and you know that I know of my blessings from The Lord and they are rich indeed.  Thank you dearly.

Cher-Well hello my friend and thank you so much for your kind words.  It is a blessing to have you here as well and never doubt that.

JM-Now are you sure you want to talk about cookies in public with me? ( don't worry, i won't mention the crumbs i found after you left but I do have one question.  What on earth were all the sand crabs doing in your pillow cases?

Thank you so very much my dearest and bestest friend.  You know I love you dearly and somehow the tide just doesn't seem to have as much punch to it since yo left but we will make it work.  

Mysteria-Don't ya just hate it when we have to snap back to reality? Thank you so much for your kindness

VAS-It is always a treat for me to be able to come in and I thank you for your kinds words.


[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (10-09-2002 02:27 PM).]

Dee
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23 posted 10-11-2002 04:14 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Mark, you never cease to amaze me with your words. As usual - stunning.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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the winds of destiny


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This is a very heartfelt and beautiful piece of art.  Thank you  for sharing.
 
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