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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-10-08 04:03 AM


Use Me

You're all smug
and I'm all frustrated.
Looks like the books
are unfairly calculated.
I want you and
you want me
for different reasons
apparently.
Now I don't
know which way
to go.
Kiss me quick.
Take me slow.
And when your all
finished with me
toss me back
to silky sea.
Someone else will
hook up with me.
For their own reasons
apparently.

JamesLee
Sept08
2002


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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
1 posted 2002-10-08 06:28 AM


What agreat thoughts dear..
I really love it..
Nice peoms...

Hugesss


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-10-08 09:44 AM


Isn't that the way of most folks?

I love the premise and your work.

Well done

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-10-08 10:58 AM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-09 08:58 PM




(sigh) This is sincerely and well-written, sweet friend, I hope now love has found a home in your heart and never uses you anymore! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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