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0 posted 2002-10-08 01:38 AM



Now I have settled back into the normal life I know
The gathering at Tampa just a few short days ago.
All bags have been unpacked, the work goes on I didn't miss
And now the time has come for me to sit and reminisce.

The time went by so fast! One minute there - next minute gone
How sad that we can't slow the clock when good times come along.
Arrivals and departures rule our lives...know what I mean?
Thank God for bits of happiness and pleasure in-between.

We rolled in around 2 - just me, Fran, Sy and Isabel,
Parked behind the other cars and rang the villa bell.
A big smile opened up the door, eyes sparkling with fun,
And we knew that, beyond a doubt, it was the Mushy One!

Another smile, another face as Krissy came in view
Then Kethry came to greet us and then we saw Titia, too!
Nan walked up to say hello and likewise did Maureen...
All these faces we had come to recognize on screen!

Marge sat on the sofa alongside her husband Bill.
Meeting all these friends I'd made was certainly a thrill.
The atmosphere was quite relaxed, the mood was light and fun..
The P.I.P. convention for the week-end had begun!!

We sat around and talked, each person feeling quite at ease,
Then it was time to get set for the night's activities.
A barbeque was planned around the pool beneath the stars
And Bill was kind enough to entertain with his guitar.

The barbie had to be assembled, done quite easily.
A task like that was simple for such pros like Sy and me.
The fire was burning bright as coals took on a reddish sheen
Thanks to pints of starter fluid and help from Maureen!

The burgers were perfection - sausages were pure delight
And, thanks to Keth, I got to taste the thrill of Vegemite!
The doctor says my stomach will be just like new some day
Though just how long that day may be he really couldn't say!

Then, after that, gifts were exchanged - a wonderful surprise!
Momentos brought from other lands appeared before my eyes!!
Things sit now on my office desk that I see constantly
Reminding me of all the friendships that have come to be.

Bill entertained with his guitar - he really is quite good
And showed us carvings he constructed out of bits of wood.
When he took breaks we all took turns reciting poetry.
Of all the things that we would do, that was the best for me.

I'd seen their words on printed page and on computer screen
And here they were reciting those same poems that I'd seen.
The voices of the authors of the poems I knew so well
Delighted us with rhymes and stories only they could tell.

The time had finally come to say good night and go to bed.
Little did I know the chaos that lay right ahead!
I'll set up the scenario so you can clearly see
That it was not my fault that it was such calamity!

There were three bedrooms - one was shared by Krissy and her mother
Marge and Bill had one, David and Lyra had the other.
Then it got more interesting...where was sweet Maureen?
A mattress in the closet - yep, she was our closet queen!

Titia, Nan and Kethry had a place that was quite cool.
They all slept on air mattresses around the backyard pool.
Two sofa beds for Fran and I and Sy and Isabel
But when I tried to lay on one I thought I was in hell!

The springs almost impaled me! The crossbars killed my back!
My body felt that it was under enemy attack!!
We blew up one air mattress, thinking that would work - instead
When I rolled over to lay down, I fell right through the bed!!

No one tried to help me out or rescue me because
They were all too busy running for their cameras!
My cries of help did me no good because it was quite clear
They were just concerned to get some pictures of the 'deer!

Somehow we made it through the night, just how I'm not quite sure.
To sleep ten feet from Isabel's more than one can endure!
But we all woke up in the morn, got dressed and set to go
Halfway across the country to the Cypress Gardens show.

The road trip has been chronicled so that I won't repeat,
Suffice to say that Titia's face was whiter than a sheet!
The Cypress Gardens skiers all performed in perfect form
And we arrived back home at last without undue alarm.

We only had an hour - our faces filled with sweat and grime
But clean clothes over dirty bodies made it just in time.
The Outback Steakhouse lost our reservations - ain't that sweet?
So we sat there another hour while waiting for a seat.

Kethry read the menu and she smiled and shook her head.
There were no Aussie foods like those they listed, Kethry said.
A bloomin' onion?What was that? She laughed so hard she cried
Then, after what seemed a year or two, we finally got inside.

The meals were magnificent - the service was top-rate.
We all dug in and cleaned up every morsel on our plate.
Marsha brought out party favors..GAWD! We made a mess!
It took the waiters all night long to clean it up, I guess.

We finally got back to the house. It had been one full day!
We sat around, had coffee, talked and passed the time away.
There were two options open that were running through my head...
Drive five hours home or spend another night thereon that bed!

We bid the group a fond farewell and said our sad goodbyes,
I felt a mix of happiness and sadness in my eyes.
Not easy leaving my new friends that I had met this way.
We packed the car, waved one more time, then slowly drove away.

Now Titia's back in Holland, Marsha's headed for the Isle
And Keth will be arriving in Austrailia in a while.
Maureen is on her way back east and Nan is Texas-bound
Lyra and her hubby probably lost and driving around.

We'll meet each night on pages blue as we have always done
Remembering these special days that we shared so much fun.
We spent our time together and now we are far apart
But every one of my new friends live right here in my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 2002-10-08 01:57 AM


A true Balladeer story..some laughter, some tears and some words to warm the heart. It was nice to share in your visit.
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2 posted 2002-10-08 03:20 AM


Balladeer, I enjoyed this so much. You painted such a good picture in my mind's eye. I could almost see all of your activities. Thanks for sharing your weekend.  It sounded like all of you had a blast.
Love to All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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3 posted 2002-10-08 04:23 AM


Sounds like lots of fun...James
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4 posted 2002-10-08 05:38 AM


this was perfect....I have been waiting to do mine in true Balladeer style..but I have to dig deep for words not yet displayed

It was my pleaseure meeting everyone..and it's hard to believe, but I do miss the closet.

hugss
M

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5 posted 2002-10-08 06:51 AM



You're truly captured some of PiP
of that we have no doubt!
Still, I would like to hear some day
a falling 'Deer in shout!


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-08-2002 02:42 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-10-08 07:06 AM


thanks for sharing these precious moments Deer....

((hugs)))
Charisma

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7 posted 2002-10-08 07:21 AM


I feel like I was there, THanks for the entertaining chronicles of the PIP squad.
Sounds wonderful! Congratulations to Marsha for putting it together. Wish I could have come!
Love to all
Liz

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8 posted 2002-10-08 07:27 AM


Rofl at the image of you falling through the bed and everyone running for camera’s…just be glad they didn’t stuff you and hang you on the wall ‘Deer!!! What a wonderful time you all had. I wish I could have been there.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

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9 posted 2002-10-08 08:15 AM


Thanks to pints of starter fluid?.....I've never tried that?....Do you drink it straight or with chasers? Over ice?....I'll bet that would "fire ya up"?....You Floridians have some very strange ways for sure.......I certainly enjoyed myself that weekend....was great getting to meet you all and partake in the festivities..You've made us all feel as though we were there Balladeer...you have a knack for that...good write...
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10 posted 2002-10-08 08:19 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this poem is like a big huge hug to all these special friends and to us all, sweet friend, you couldn't have spoken of this wonderful trip better! God Bless You All, sweet friend, I am delighted you had the best time ever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-08-2002 09:39 AM).]

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11 posted 2002-10-08 08:22 AM


It sounds like you all had a wonderful time! *s I, too, was at a poet meet several years ago and yes, time flies when you're having fun!

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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12 posted 2002-10-08 08:40 AM


Balladeer,
Wonderful job, just as it happened. And I find you a gracious old softy.

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13 posted 2002-10-08 09:05 AM


'Deer..Written in true Balladeer style..
This made me smile...brought a tear as well...
But what it really did, was make me even more
determined to be at one of the meets in Michigan
if..and when, we have one there.
Wonderfully penned.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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14 posted 2002-10-08 09:07 AM


Thrilled to be caught up in such a wonderful write. Almost as good as being there Balladeer. Wonderful memories for all.
ThisDiamond

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15 posted 2002-10-08 09:10 AM


Gracious, yes... he's definitely that! But Seymour!!! Ya gotta quit giving away all of Deer's deep dark secrets like that. *EG* Isn't it bad enough he had to drive 5 hours to find a bed he wouldn't break... without you telling his personal heartbreaks? LOL

Deer One, this is superb.... through your wonderful tale, I can almost believe I was there where I wanted so much to be instead of moaning my fate on the other side of the Gulf. *S*

On the other hand... it could have been ME in that collapsing bed! ROFL (I certainly wouldn't have had my claustrophobic self in the closet! LOL)

Thank you for this poetically perfect documentary AND the pics...


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16 posted 2002-10-08 09:27 AM


Michael, no one can tell a poetic story like you. I felt I was sitting right there during all the adventures and laughter.

Thank for for continuing to share the stories from the gathering.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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17 posted 2002-10-08 09:37 AM


Sounds like fun was had by all ... some at your expense it seems.

Couldn't happen to a sweeter guy

You might have to take out a loan to pay the Chiropractor, huh

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18 posted 2002-10-08 09:42 AM


Now this was one long poem that was a pleasure to read from top to bottom! Sort of felt like you had me in your pocket during the gathering and I was able to peek out and see and hear everything! Glad you all had such a great time!

Linda

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19 posted 2002-10-08 02:15 PM


Sounds like a GREAT time!

Thank you for sharing the fun you all had 'deer!


~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

[This message has been edited by Irie (10-08-2002 02:15 PM).]

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20 posted 2002-10-08 03:37 PM



Poor Deer thinks he's not exposed here
Then he doesn't know me well
I have to share this with you all see
Click below, the pics show it well
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Balladeer, reading your chronicle almost made me cry thinking of you all again and how we laughed.

But....did you say putting together the BBQ was an easy job In my memory it took quite some time and I recall there were some parts left on the table

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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21 posted 2002-10-08 03:40 PM


This was sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

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22 posted 2002-10-08 03:44 PM


I will definitely have to make Michigan...just gotta meet all you crazy people....you'll all need at least one designated sane person yanno...

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23 posted 2002-10-08 04:56 PM


Thank you for being you  

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24 posted 2002-10-08 05:27 PM


Deer,
nobody tells a story quite like you, and they say truth is not stranger than fiction.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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25 posted 2002-10-08 05:37 PM


'Deer dearest heart this is fabulous and I can see the scene too, in living colour as well
. I love this as always YOUR writing is top notch. You know my favourite bit was hearing you read, it was spell binding everyone 'Deer is an incredible orator, and a treat NOT to be missed. (Well, worth travelling half way around the world for, and then some)

Truly special writing and you know I utterly love it.
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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26 posted 2002-10-08 10:57 PM


DeVine One,,,thanks for coming along!

Ethel...it was great! Hopefully there will be more of them!

James..yes, it was..

Maureen...the closet miss misses the closet? LOL! I think you had the best place!!

Sunshine...no, you don't!!!

Charisma..and thanks for coming along..

Liz...Marsha did a great job! You and I have been through a couple of get-togethers. Hopefully there will be more...

Tracey...as a matter of fact they DID try to mount me!!!

Toerag...yes, starter fluid is good for more than after-shave. If you'll try it I'll mail you a case!!

Noah...you have it right. It IS a big hug...

Chanson...right you are! Thanks for responding!

Sy,,,thanks, pal, but please don't feed a line like that to Toerag!!!!

Enchantress...well, keep bugging Lyra! She swears it will happen at her place. We may even invite Ron...if he's a good boy.

Diamond Lady...wonderful memories indeed. Thank you...

Suthern...I wish you HAD been there! You were missed. Glad you enjoyed and I hope you're feeling better

Marti....thanks for being there to share with...

Interloper...Chiropractor? Not as long a women have hands!!

Linda...don't say bottom! *ouch* Thanks for sharing it with us..

Irie..it was! I thank you...

Titia....reading your poem almost made ME cry! (I don't know why they put so many extra parts in the box!!)

Toerag...You - the designated sane man? Now THERE'S a real picture! LOL! You better make it to one of them, big man....we would have a blast!

Mysteria...what a nice thing to say! I tried being somebody else once but I was beside myself!!

Kethry...and they are right! I couldn't have made this stuff up. You were a big highlight of the trip!

Marsha...it was all you. You set it up and made it the success it was. I'll never be able to thank you enough for all your hard work making it a reality. You are super...

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27 posted 2002-10-08 11:28 PM


You summed it all up so beautifully, Michael...
and it was so wonderful to meet you and Franni and the others...
As for another poet meet in Michigan at my house... I really do want to do that, but hope that I will still be amongst the living next year... and of course just the thought of a poet meet here in Kalamazoo is bound to keep me going and give me something else to live for.
David and I finally got home... but we didn't get lost...  we went to Miami to visit my mother, who told me that I was too thin and then the next day, told me I was too fat...  I guess thats gotta be a poem someday.
Anyway... I loved your poem... even though your mattress shenanigans kept us awake all night.
~ lovely to meet you hugs

Lyra

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28 posted 2002-10-09 01:24 AM


LOL...i'm so bummed i missed it....

sounds like you folks had great fun...   

thanks for sharing it with us!  

hugs, g

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29 posted 2002-10-09 09:18 AM


Deer, Deer, Deer - You tell an awesome tale, for sure - and I sure wish I'd been there to hear all those wonderful poets share their work - and to help pull you up off the floor...
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30 posted 2002-10-09 01:25 PM


A great story about a great weekend. Thanks for sharing your precious moments.
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31 posted 2002-10-09 02:20 PM


rofg....wonderful tale.....one day, jellybeans will be added in for flavor into the next gathering,
sigh...of course you know what a dreamer I am, but what a nice dream to entertain, que no?

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32 posted 2002-10-09 02:27 PM


In hopes that Madame Chipmunk comes back to read this, YES THAT'S GOT TO BE A POEM SOMEDAY!

As for 'Deer...what DOES a falling 'Deer sound like, anyway?

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33 posted 2002-10-09 03:44 PM


A falling Deer is loud, Karilea.... Very loud!
Like thunder on your roof... But it was all so much fun even if it kept us awake all night.
~ hugs from an insomniac chipmunk

Lyra

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