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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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0 posted 2002-10-08 12:02 PM




           So often,

I wake up missing you.

           Only your touch

can soothe the ache alive in me.

           I'm brave.

I tell myself

           I ~can~

live without you, just not easily.

           I hurt

in the very deepest part of me.

         ...I miss you so...

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-10-08 12:06 PM


I enjoyed this.  It is so hard missing someone. Thanks for the read.
secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
2 posted 2002-10-08 03:48 AM


I know how you feel dear coz I miss someone sooooo much... It's really hard to miss someone you love..
I love your words so much...
Nice work..


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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3 posted 2002-10-08 10:26 AM


Miah and Secret Life, thanks for the response...yes, this is a part of life that very few ever escape...though written long ago...it still touches my heart, and, though time is a wonderful healer....every so often.........those
"memories" come back.....
Again, thanks,

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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