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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-10-07 11:05 PM

~Ever~
Allow me to remain
The smile that fills your heart
The sigh that is but a whispering
Of my name
~Ever~
When the world is dark
Let my memory guide you
To places inside that bring to you
Peace, comfort and safety
~Ever~
Follow dreams that we created
In the intensity of our touching souls
As when the blending of hearts
Left no need except that of lingering
~Ever~
Have no doubts that you, my love
Need but a thought to bring me close
For I am never too far away
Because you, are my heaven

~SEA~

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-10-07 11:06 PM

I really like this. You write very well.

Thank you.

Kielo

I need to change my signature. :D

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-07 11:08 PM

Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2002-10-07 11:34 PM

I wish someone felt this way about me. I guess we all do. Loved every word, sweet one.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-07 11:39 PM

Have no doubts that you, my love
Need but a thought to bring me close
For I am never too far away
Because you, are my heaven
-----------------------------------------
Sea, beautiful as always...
with a perfect ending...loved this!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-10-07 11:45 PM

Oh, a great love poem. Precious!
Thanks.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2002-10-08 09:04 AM

SO nice to see you back. Very nice poem with alot of heart here. Some things never change and some shouldn't

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-10-08 09:32 AM

This is so touching and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thoughts of love this bright beautiful morning.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-10-08 09:40 AM

heaven is your eyes
love is the warmth of your heart
name the dream Susan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-10-08 09:43 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, the bauty of loves heavens always fill your words! (kiss on cheek) May evermore you find a moment written in the stars with a smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

10 posted 2002-10-08 10:11 AM

There are ever words, as long as there are hearts. Ever.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-10-08 12:25 PM

Ever...
...More

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2002-10-08 12:31 PM

This is timeless. It is for "Ever".

Not only do you write extremely well, but you have wonderfully unique ways of presenting them.

EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-10-08 12:49 PM

HeyLittleSEAGal~
'Bout time I found time to read a little and find you back among your friends~

Lovely thoughts ... as always~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

14 posted 2002-10-08 01:02 PM

Summer
breezes
in the
fall.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

15 posted 2002-10-08 05:47 PM

this is almost too sweet... *smile*

you just have one of those hearts methinks.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2002-10-08 06:13 PM

SEA, only a beautiful person inside, with a sweet, loving heart could write such love poetry as this. Every poem I read of yours sounds like a sweet love song to my heart. Thanks so much for sharing your work.

With Love To All,
Ethel....Garys Lady

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

17 posted 2002-10-08 06:59 PM

Simply lovely SEA!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

18 posted 2002-10-08 07:34 PM

"Let my memory guide you
to places inside that bring to you
Peace, comfort and safety."

Things we all want to provide for those we love abound in this write...I enjoyed it very much SEA.

...believe what your heart feels.....

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