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Open Poetry #22

But Mother Said.........

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-07 10:20 PM

But Mother Said.....

Remember your mother told you
not to hang out with girls like me?
We're the ones who have the most fun,
come along for the ride and see.

"But Mother said..."

Honey, I could really show you
what life and love are all about,
teach you things to make your head spin,
leaving you without any doubt.

"But Mother said..."

When you think the fun is over
I won't be letting you go home.
There's one more thing for you to learn
that needs the two of us...alone.

"To hell with what Mother said!"

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

[This message has been edited by Dee (10-07-2002 10:21 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-07 10:23 PM

I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2002-10-08 09:32 AM

HHHHmmmmmmmm......... now this one really sparks some images that tend to make me ditto exactly what you say in the last line. What the heck.....she is bound to be used to it by now so " To hell with what mother said".

Dang that felt good to say. So nice to find one of yours today, now what about that verse?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-10-08 09:47 AM

Cute and irreverant blended with hormones

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-10-08 09:50 AM

Grinning here, since I rarely listened to what my mother said. It seemed we never spoke the same language.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2002-10-11 04:12 AM

loner, good

Mark, good to see you

and glad you liked. And the verse is coming, you are just hard to write with!

Interloper, does that mean you like it?

Some think there are too many hormones, even at my age.

Midnitesun, nor did I!

thanks all,
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

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