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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-07 09:45 PM


You drive around a curve
In the beautiful Blue Ridge Parkway
And you come among a field
It is about dusk
And you see about 25 or more deer
People are walking in the field
But the deer don't run
But the people don't risk
Getting to close
The deer feed on the grass
And frolic amongst themselves
They don't notice the humans
They just notice one another
And play around

Cold hands means a warm heart

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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
1 posted 2002-10-07 09:49 PM


awesome..wish I was there today..enjoyed this
smiles, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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2 posted 2002-10-08 10:16 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, up here near Guanella Pass in the areas around Golden and Boulder, we have many white-tailed deer annually and it truly is a treasure to see the packs! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-08 10:21 PM


Julie, this is so sweet. There are a lot of deer around this part of Florida, too. I love them, especially when they are in packs. I love your poems, Julie.
With Love,
Ethel

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