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Love Forever Faceless In My Dreams
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Love Forever Faceless In My Dreams |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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Love, forever faceless in my dreams, what sacrilege was made before my cognizance out side my door that left its mark in bloody streams and urged your flight beyond me as its consequence? lacking eyes she will not meet my solid gaze which in not blinking only shine of verity, denied of ears she'll never hear words in phrase unwavering oaths in true emotions clarity. Without lips how will she ever taste what's sweet and know no bitterness in our fruited kiss? Absent a nose what proof that naught foul will greet nor e'er rise among our passion and it's bliss. Love, please paint a face into my dreams and lift whatever curse my ancestry begat, she has a body that is really quite supreme and we've no problem knowing what to do with that. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Beautiful and very well written. ======================================= she has a body that is really quite supreme and we've no problem knowing what to do with that. ======================================= I like this part the best. I found it quite humorous, though I'm sure that's not what you intended. LOL ~Krissie "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
RSWELLS, very good poetry. Thanks for sharing. I hope your dream becomes a reality for you. Best Wishes. Ethel...garysgirl |
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