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This, The Other Side of My Heart

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regards2you
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Warm
dark forest.
Slanted
silver rays
of
sunlight
quietly changing
shades of green
into
shimmering
stillness.
This,
the other side
of my heart.
This,
my deepest deep,
where no one
is allowed but,
God.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-07-2002 01:22 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Patricia, this is so good. You are a great poet. Thanks for sharing.

With Love,
Ethel
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2 posted 10-07-2002 01:55 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Awesome work here

Cold hands means a warm heart

secretlife
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What agreat poems.. I love it..

Nice..


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

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4 posted 10-07-2002 03:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Regards2You~
A belated WELCOME TO PASSIONS from me~

This is really just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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regards2you
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5 posted 10-07-2002 04:17 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you

Ethel, thanks, so glad you like it. And, please call me Pat. You are such a love

The-Loner-23, Thank you so much

Secretlife,  how good to know its loved, means a lot to me

And, Marge, thanks so much for the warm welcome from you. I am glad you took the time. It helps me to feel included and a 'part of'.  Kind of you and a big hug back to you and big, big smile. With lots of love, Pat
  

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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regards2you
A wonderfuk write, enjoyed
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7 posted 10-07-2002 07:27 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Beautiful words, very much enjoyed.  Welcome to Passions.

Take care.....Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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Very touching.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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9 posted 10-07-2002 08:06 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

This is so beautiful!!
This touched me deeply.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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10 posted 10-07-2002 10:26 PM       View Profile for GOlDsparklESS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOlDsparklESS

this is a very serene peak into your soul.

::applause::
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oh I do love this and I'm going to tuck it into my library!
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A sanctuary within the heart where only God is allowed entrance!

Impressive!

Thanks for sharing!
regards2you
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Seymour, thank you, kind sir  

Suetang, thank you for the welcome, hugs back and glad you liked it  

Krissie, thank you, it's a good place to go Krissie, just close your eyes and visualize...ahhhhhhhh calming

Enchantress, happy you're touched

Sea, oh, how nice, Thanks

Radrook, what a wonderful way to put it. Thank you, much.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

regards2you
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Goidsparkless, yes, we need to have a special place for God, but He doesn't mind me sharing...afterall, it's His trees....big smile as I thank you for the applause..means a lot..

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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precious
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