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The Eye of I
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The Eye of I |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Eye of I I cannot suave my sanity Nor out run my humanity. I wait the fate of pendulums swing And the angst that it will bring I cannot stop the spill of rhyme Nor can I stop the sands of time. I wait upon an ageless sea And watch reflections aging me. I fly within a minds abyss On the wings of a lovers kiss And only vagueness shows the goal And only mist surrounds my soul. The path I walk is eye to I O’er valley’s green and sails of sigh And only time does hold my hand And offered me a wedding band So why remains the mast of now And I remain the path of how. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And only time does hold my hand And offered me a wedding band So why remains the mast of now And I remain the path of how. ==================================== and those will be my waaay cool lines for the day... and...I have said many times...seeing things your wise "eye of I" grants us vision to see into the wisdom of why. The view of you makes this moth sigh. makes me winkie too  *ww*    |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy..your wise words of wisdom I long for each morning... Just as I long for the sun to rise... And always like magic you appear... To calm me and set me on the right track for the day ahead.. Thank you dear poet sir.. You are a love. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOOHHHHH, Seymour....this is SOOOOOOOOOO beautiful...just as is all your work I've seen. Your love and compassion just flow out of you. Music to my heart. Thanks so much for sharing and teaching!!! Love to all, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, "The view of you makes this moth sigh." And the words of you make this butterfly fly. WWRS :kis:  Enchantress And what would I do without my morning hugs from you. Ethel, My thanks to you for the read and like. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, Sy. Well done indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed your eye's view. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Interloper Midnitesun Glad you enjoyed my eyes view. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Sey !!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Brilliant. Each 'line' you write is a volume of poetry in and of itself, to re-read and ponder. What a delight. Like having a delicious meal, savoring each course, and when you think you cannot eat another bite, dessert, your closings. So full, now I have to go take a nap. I enjoy your poetry trememdously and, like others, look forward to the next. Thanks for making our day. Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I cannot stop the spill of rhyme Nor can I stop the sands of time. I wait upon an ageless sea And watch reflections aging me.' Oh dearest man ... you've written me to a 'T'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris. Thank you so much. Pat, Just love your comments Marge. Enjoyed your reply. the_loner_23, Awesome is good. LOL |
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