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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-10-07 06:18 AM





Time Keeps Ticking Away

We are in different timzones
Will our timing ever be right
Shall I wish you  good day
Good morning or goodnight

The minutes are ticking over
Do you gaze your clock too
When will the time be right
To reveal I’m  missing you

As time keeps ticking away
Upon my clock on the wall
Still find time to remember
The fond memories I recall

Watching the  hours go by
Although this hour is late  
Anxiously beats my heart
In hoping to communicate

My clock shows midnight
Here upon my nightstand
I keep you in my thoughts
In dreams in which to land

Hope©2002

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-07 10:16 AM


I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-10-07 10:25 AM


HopeS,
This is an eligant and excellent write, enjoyed.

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