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Friend and Lover
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Friend and Lover |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
. When nights are cold you are a warmth that glows. When days are hot you are a cooling breeze. When others mock me you begin to grieve! When everyone is cruel your kindness grows. Where other women shiver you perspire though blizzards at my windows start to rage. When my horizons freeze in their entire instead of seeking shelter you remain. When prideful women call me fool and liar. Your trust and love sustain me once again. [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-07-2002 04:30 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Radrook, this is sooooo good. Sounds like in this poem that your love is all you need for every obstacle. Love does conquer all, don't you think? Best wishes to you. Ethel....Gary's Lady (garysgirl) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks for feedback. Glad you enjoyed. God bless! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A lovely testament. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful...much enjoyed by this reader. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very nice  Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I really love it.. what agreat words.. Nice work.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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