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desperado
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0 posted 2002-10-06 10:34 PM



its 8 am and the sun is up
yet your still sleeping soundly
wraped in my arms, smile on your face
its a beautiful morning with you here
the only thing going through my mind
is how happy I am to have you
and your so beautiful in the morning
even though you hate the way you look
because the way that you love me
makes me feel the richest on earth
from the beginning movements of waking up
to the time I sing you to sleep
all I want to do is make you happy
so goodmorning beautiful, how was your night
I'm in heaven here with you by my side
just one more night to hold you
cause you're all I need

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

© Copyright 2002 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-10-06 10:36 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-10-06 10:36 PM


Oh very nice. She is a lucky lady.

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-06 10:43 PM


OOOOHHHHH, Desperado. This is SOOOOOOOO beautiful. Sounds like you love someone like I do my Darling. You expressed your feelings very well. Thanks for sharing with us.
Best Wishes,
Ethel....garysgirl

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-10-06 10:57 PM


Awww...this is so sweet.
Just what every woman wants to hear...
that they look good to the man they love
even in the morning.
Nice write.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2002-10-06 11:17 PM


Well desperado, you've come to your senses, and graced us with a beautiful love poem!
What a tender heart you have...thank you very much dear poet, for sharing your emotions with the rest of us. And I sure hope your feelings are contagious. The world needs more happy hearts who know how to thank their lovers this way.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-10-07 12:16 PM


Fantastic from start to finish...James
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