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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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A survivor of an avalanche of knowledge… Victim of stale interpretations, threadbare memories, and inhaled phermones of primal fear. Exorcise the ghosts of yesterday; Those conditioned hologram responses which terminally haunt the cellular level; Atoms of doubt disperse and gather like flocks of migratory birds vanishing in the blink of an eye…. New cells of hope making a grand appearance, re-creating again and again, in the intergalactic space of soul and body…. A last chance to change is the interval between Heaven’s gate and the hell of missing the mark once again Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A last chance to change is the interval between Heaven’s gate and the hell of missing the mark once again -------------------------------------------- WOW Cher!! Very very powerful piece of writing. Much enjoyed tonight. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Exorcise the ghosts of yesterday; Those conditioned hologram responses which terminally haunt the cellular level; Atoms of doubt disperse and gather like flocks of migratory birds vanishing in the blink of an eye…. New cells of hope making a grand appearance, WOW! is right Cher, an excellent piece. Spoke volumes to me at this point in my life. Thank you. This is wonderful. "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
You 2 : hugs and big thanks.. I am stepping out into a new horizon for me...a more modern style of free verse.. It is a little intimidating as I leave the comfortable "love poem" place for new ground. Therefore I am extremely delighted that this had an impact and such a response! You both made my evening!  Cher Poetry is: |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
some great lines here, enjoyed  El riesgo vive siempre! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Brian: thanks for thew time to comment. I appreciate it! aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
New cells of hope making a grand appearance, re-creating again and again, in the intergalactic space of soul and body…. A last chance to change is the interval between Heaven’s gate and the hell of missing the mark once again ************** A very powerful piece you have left with us. I am trying to remember reading one of this style from you, but none the less, it definitely reads great coming from your pen. There are some comparisons to this one and my life right now that I will hold on to and I thank you for that. It is always a plearsure for me when I find one of your works and this one holds special meanings that will carry me through this day. Excellent writing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cher, absolutely brilliant! Not only did it appeal to my artistic side, but it appealed to my scientific side as well! Here's to improving the contents of our cellular memory! Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding! One I shall keep to re-read again later, it has many layers. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Mark: I am so glad to see you show up ...This is a fairly new form for me...I think we all struggle with our Self and it's destructive side, desiring to overcome and get the lesson learned down so that it might not have to be tested again in that area...then growth..and on to the next test to shape our character... Anyhow I am glad it hit home for you..it was meant to bring some insight and wisdom. I have been tested so very much and growth is ongoing. Thanks for gracing my poem with your thoughtful comments. aloha, Cher EA: Wonderful I hoped it woud give insight and bless..thanks for you eager comments and kindness Midnite: I am glad this imparted something of value to you..thanks so much! hugs to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Don't know how I missed this earlier. Simply put, you are a genius! One of the best poems I've read in long time. With warm regards, Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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