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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-10-06 01:34 PM

In shadows, dawn awakens;
rich,  fog, veil remnants of nights dreams;

    If we should meet, touch
the interior of  hearts, would
you then know:      there lies
a part with in me        you

that I listened to you
play softly,     {how my hair
fell,     strands}  --   one by one framing
a smile, that only you give

An echo    finding the kiss
upon my lips   held by night
           it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
            in silence beneath the noise of    storms   I'll

watch them float gently away
upon a melancholy night

       what lies in my heart

I shall be content, for now

~~~
Inspired~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-10-06 02:07 PM

Lauren - this is so soft and gentle - I love it. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-10-06 02:32 PM

Very soft. Very nice. A gentle read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-06 02:50 PM

Lauren...you once again leave me speechless..
This is breathtakingly beautiful...
So softly sensual...lovely.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-06 02:55 PM

Oh, Lauren, this is so sweet. thanks for sharing what's in your heart. Best Wishes.

Ethel...garysgirl

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-10-06 02:58 PM

A beautiful inspire to a beautiful lady. As always dear friend, your words touch.....

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-10-07 10:25 AM

A part that has always been, but yet, ever cannot be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-10-07 10:29 AM

Lauren,
A soft and lovely write, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-07 10:30 AM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-10-07 10:33 AM

If we should meet, touch
the interior of  hearts, would
you then know:      there lies
a part with in me        you

that I listened to you
play softly,     {how my hair
fell,     strands}  --   one by one framing
a smile, that only you give

An echo    finding the kiss
upon my lips   held by night
           it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
======================================

time and time again, you write what lies in places too deep inside me to yet surface...still every word touches that place and warms me.
This is classic, beautiful Lauren poetry...like reading a butterfly in flight.

jm

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-10-07 10:45 AM

So sweetly dampened of the pages...a feeling I can well relate. All blessings. ThisDiamond

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

11 posted 2002-10-07 11:17 AM

This is wonderful. Easy to read, hard to forget. Great.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-10-07 12:40 PM

The depths of your heart's memories flow through this piece, Lauren, softly and gently.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2002-10-07 12:50 PM

"{how my hair
fell, strands} -- one by one framing
a smile, that only you give"

I particularly loved this image, Lauren. Beautifully penned, my friend. *hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star,

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2002-10-07 01:03 PM

Beautiful, Green eyed one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2002-10-07 09:40 PM

I am clueless who inspires you...But...
I would like to thank them...
Cause you surely are inspired!!!!

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

16 posted 2002-10-08 12:25 PM

for now... ahh dear, that's the hard part - if you can/could achieve that, you would be far ahead of most of us.

C

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2002-10-08 02:27 AM

   it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
            in silence beneath the noise of    storms

There's my reflection again in your words..
You reach so far into the heart Lauren~
and always a treasure to read~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

18 posted 2002-10-08 09:14 AM

Some shadows offer a refreshing coolness to fight off the heat.....but the shadows of your heart carry a warmth that give that special feeling of coziness and comfort found only in our personal blankets of peace. So wonderful are your words always and so descriptive in their portrayal.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

19 posted 2002-10-08 09:24 AM

"In shadows, dawn awakens;
rich, fog, veil remnants of nights dreams;"

I had to read on with intro lines like these--and I wasn't disappointed! --so dreamy...

P.S. What a beautiful photo!

Linda

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

20 posted 2002-10-08 09:41 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Lauren, this sounds so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright! (sigh) Such wonder always graces your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

21 posted 2002-10-08 12:03 PM

Foggy content...
absolutely lovely!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

22 posted 2002-10-08 11:39 PM

Greeneyes - your words grace me as I read them. Only as you can write these poems of romance...

BC

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

23 posted 2002-10-09 01:30 AM

I miss the linger of your trace,
in silence beneath the noise of storms

Very impressive!
Wow!
Thanks for sharing!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

24 posted 2002-10-09 01:41 AM

Lauren,
I must say...the romanticism in this write is so tender and emotive. A sweet masterpiece that truly touched my soul. Thank you.

AND...

Happy Birthday BABY!!! Wooohoooo!!!!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

25 posted 2002-10-09 04:34 PM

Wow, Lauren.
I so need to read
everything you've ever written.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

26 posted 2002-10-09 10:03 PM

in contentedness. . . there is. . .

wonderful. . . as always. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

27 posted 2002-12-19 01:15 PM

Again, wow...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

28 posted 2007-11-11 01:16 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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