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Shadows of Heart

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 10-06-2002 01:34 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


In shadows, dawn awakens;
rich,  fog, veil remnants of nights dreams;


    If we should meet, touch
the interior of  hearts, would
you then know:      there lies
a part with in me        you

that I listened to you
play softly,     {how my hair
fell,     strands}  --   one by one framing

a smile, that only you give

An echo    finding the kiss
upon my lips   held by night
           it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
            in silence beneath the noise of    storms   I'll

watch them float gently away
upon a melancholy night

       what lies in my heart

I shall be content, for now

~~~
Inspired~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

© Copyright 2002 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach


1 posted 10-06-2002 02:07 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Lauren - this is so soft and gentle - I love it. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 10-06-2002 02:32 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Very soft. Very nice. A gentle read.
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 10-06-2002 02:50 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Lauren...you once again leave me speechless..
This is breathtakingly beautiful...
So softly sensual...lovely.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 10-06-2002 02:55 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Oh, Lauren, this is so sweet. thanks for sharing what's in your heart. Best Wishes.

Ethel...garysgirl
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5 posted 10-06-2002 02:58 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

A beautiful inspire to a beautiful lady.  As always dear friend, your words touch.....

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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The heart of you


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A part that has always been, but yet, ever cannot be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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7 posted 10-07-2002 10:29 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lauren,
A soft and lovely write, enjoyed.
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Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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If we should meet, touch
the interior of  hearts, would
you then know:      there lies
a part with in me        you

that I listened to you
play softly,     {how my hair
fell,     strands}  --   one by one framing
a smile, that only you give

An echo    finding the kiss
upon my lips   held by night
           it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
======================================


time and time again, you write what lies in places too deep inside me to yet surface...still every word touches that place and warms me.
This is classic, beautiful Lauren poetry...like reading a butterfly in flight.
jm

In the space between now and then
I lost the fire, lost a friend
and Ill never be the same again
Still, I believe in the innocence
we gave away.

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So sweetly dampened of the pages...a feeling I can well relate. All blessings. ThisDiamond
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11 posted 10-07-2002 11:17 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you

This is wonderful. Easy to read, hard to forget. Great.

Pat

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12 posted 10-07-2002 12:40 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

The depths of your heart's memories flow through this piece, Lauren, softly and gently.
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By the sea


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"{how my hair
fell,     strands}  --   one by one framing
a smile, that only you give"

I particularly loved this image, Lauren.  Beautifully penned, my friend.  *hugs*


The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star,

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Deep in the heart


14 posted 10-07-2002 01:03 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Beautiful, Green eyed one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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I am clueless who inspires you...But...
I would like to thank them...
Cause you surely are inspired!!!!
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Purgatorial Incarceration


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for now... ahh dear, that's the hard part - if you can/could achieve that, you would be far ahead of most of us.

C
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   it aches in me
the fingers of  my tears are sore

I miss the linger of your trace,
            in silence beneath the noise of    storms

There's my reflection again in your words..
You reach so far into the heart Lauren~
and always a treasure to read~
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18 posted 10-08-2002 09:14 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Some shadows offer a refreshing coolness to fight off the heat.....but the shadows of your heart carry a warmth that give that special feeling of coziness and comfort found only in our personal blankets of peace.  So wonderful are your words always and so descriptive in their portrayal.
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"In shadows, dawn awakens;
rich, fog, veil remnants of nights dreams;"

I had to read on with intro lines like these--and I wasn't disappointed! --so dreamy...

P.S. What a beautiful photo!

Linda
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(big hugggssssss) Oh Lauren, this sounds so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright! (sigh) Such wonder always graces your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Listening to every heart


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Foggy content...
absolutely lovely!
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highways, & byways, for now


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Greeneyes - your words grace me as I read them. Only as you can write these poems of romance...

BC
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I miss the linger of your trace,
            in silence beneath the noise of    storms  

Very impressive!
Wow!
Thanks for sharing!
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24 posted 10-09-2002 01:41 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Lauren,
I must say...the romanticism in this write is so tender and emotive. A sweet masterpiece that truly touched my soul. Thank you.


AND...

Happy Birthday BABY!!! Wooohoooo!!!!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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