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........tears of wax......(senryu)
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........tears of wax......(senryu) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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burning candle weeps as romance wanes from deceit flickering flame dies ~~~ ~~~ Chris B. Oct, 2002 ~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So much said here Chris... with so few words... Excellent...love it!! ~Hugs, luv and miss ya, Teed!~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
...may the flame of your passion burn loyal blue and true... my wish for you... nicely written Chris. ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is beautiful....  Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris, a wonderful Senryu...you should join up with the class in Poetry Workshop - Senryus, Tankas, Haikus are the theme of the month! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
NancyLee - miss ya too!! hugs!! scorpio - what a lovely wish - thankyou! Lauren - thankyou dear lady Karilea - that might be interesting! Thankyou sweet poetess. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, I love this. Thanks for sharing yor work. Love to all, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - thankyou so much. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Tears of a candle, always make the moon glow a little less. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Short and sweet, enjoyed very much. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
M.Romeo - thankyou for reading and commenting. loner - thanks so much Seymour - Thanks for stopping by. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So well done, and so true. Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lovely, but sad. Missed you, Chris. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sad senryu, but so nicely penned. I love this short style, it carries so much thought in so few words. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your flame never dies too much love in such a heart just turn down the wick Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra - hello sweet poetess! Thankyou Michael - You missed me? Awww...it feels good to be missed. Thanks & hugs Midnitesun - Yes, I like the short ones too. Maybe it's because I am only five feet tall....lol. Thankyou Interloper- my dear poet friend, what a beautiful reply. Thankyou so much. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You know I love minimalist poetry.This one was very good. paladin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
paladin - thankyou for the compliment. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so beautiful but sad, sweet firend, I hope this currently doesn't relate to you though I know so many who does feel this and my heart wishes for all candles to burn brightly again with love! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - dear heart....no this does not pertain to me. My candle of love still shines brightly!! Thankyou for reading and commenting. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
AWSOME! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rad - thankyou so much. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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