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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-10-06 07:40 AM


Thank You

My mind has sipped that rye of sky
And dizzied on the spirits high
And fragile wings of rhythmic rhyme
Allowed this flight but for a time.

For nectar of your flowers youth
Has seeped into my sweet of tooth
To agonize this old centaur
Holding ecstasy of mentor

The randy of my dragons dare
Has set afire my dreamers lair
And I no longer wile the hours
Or lie among the ghostly flowers.

But roar into the spirits wind
Daring time my years exscind
And curse the nature of the bend
To make another better end

But we know better my randy friend
There really is no other end.

© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-10-06 08:52 AM


Soar on... There's truly no better end - Write? Right...
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-10-06 09:21 AM


Wonderful morning read Sy!
Enjoyed much with my tea...
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-10-06 09:23 AM


Seymour - lovely!! Thankyou for this joy to read on a sunny Sunday morn. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-10-06 09:29 AM



I love seeing the ladies line up to read Sy in the morning...it always seems like just the right thing to do...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-06 09:48 AM


Good morning Mr. T.!  

Your mind "has sipped that rye of sky"
And mine drinks words from sweet wise Sy!

~ Your randy dragons are dandy! ~

EA

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6 posted 2002-10-06 09:58 AM


......nor, should there be!

Brilliant!
Stunning!

I am left breathless, (quite possibly just from flapping those damn butterfly wings-fragile, but they get  heavy).

Enjoying you tremendously,
Pat

...and, no, - Thank YOU!

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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7 posted 2002-10-06 11:08 AM


Sy,  I see you have let the dragon out
again.....Super Job....good morning to ya.

Krishankins
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8 posted 2002-10-06 11:17 AM


Simply WONDERFUL!!



Loving this one, Seymore!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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9 posted 2002-10-06 11:58 AM


you words are wonderful sir... enjoyed this much..


Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

HopeS
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10 posted 2002-10-06 12:13 PM


Wonderful read Sy
Dragon breathing desire
Your words truly inspire
Hope


Janet Marie
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11 posted 2002-10-06 01:33 PM


Tis us who wishes to thank you ...
grateful for all you say and do.
Thankful for each verse and rhyme,
grateful for each moment in time.

I dont know how all things are supposed to end ...
I just know I am better for the gift of calling you friend.

~~~


*winkiewinkie*


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12 posted 2002-10-06 02:27 PM


Seymour, your words are music to my mind. Thank  YOU  so much!!!
Love to all,
Ethel...garysgirl

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-10-06 05:51 PM


To all my lovely butterflies I thank you from Randy's heart. Having a very busy day with reality and just grabed a minute to thank for this wonderful reception. to all.
JM, I'll try and write you tomight.

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-10-06 06:38 PM


Seymour~
You are to be thanked for being YOU~
(great legs you've got too~)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-10-06 07:37 PM


Marge,
Thank you for the comp and you are one of main butterflies.

ecrivan
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16 posted 2002-10-07 12:07 PM


enjoyed this read, Sy


Mistletoe Angel
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17 posted 2002-10-08 07:59 PM


"For nectar of your flowers youth
Has seeped into my sweet of tooth
To agonize this old centaur
Holding ecstasy of mentor"




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, may you always fly happily with the spirit of youth on dragons back and embrace your wildest dreams, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2002-10-08 10:18 PM


ecrivan
Thank you my friend.

Noah,
Always enjoy your comments.

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