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Friday Night at Wal-Mart

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Miss Behavin'
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25 posted 10-06-2002 08:42 PM       View Profile for Miss Behavin'   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Behavin'

You surely weren't Mysteria
at Walmart Friday night,
Or you'd have spent a hundred bucks
At every aisle in sight!

How do you go into that store
And come out spending none?
I too go there and spend my dough
It's really so much fun.

One aisle I missed, I must go back;
I hope it's not too late.
It's Sunday night, they're not closed yet...
I need a Walmart date!!




Mysteria
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26 posted 10-07-2002 03:00 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Michael I LOVE Wal-Mart!  When Wal-Mart came to Canada, that meant I could eat and shop at the same time cool beans!
Larry C
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27 posted 10-07-2002 03:22 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Wal-mart seems to be the happenin' place! Figures you'd be in on that. Super Wal-Marts are even better!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Toerag
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28 posted 10-07-2002 08:13 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yassee ladies!!! This old fart's even too cheap to buy a quart of "Equate" motor oil (compare to Quaker State 10W-30) for his race car..AT WALMART!!!.....

Balladeer....this is a great write...I enjoyed it....it is pathetic though when all we have to look forward to is a night on the town at Walmart though...ain't it?....
Enchantress
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29 posted 10-07-2002 08:42 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

LOL@Toe's reply.
'Deer...only you can write one of these and
have me in tears...from laughing so hard.
Great fun read..take me with you next time?
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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30 posted 10-07-2002 10:49 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yea, you are probably one of those that park in the fire lane and then when confronted by parking lot security, you say you just went in to grab something real quick.

(I think it's time for a job change)

Loved this one Deer...and you got it just right, for sure!
lucky
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31 posted 10-08-2002 02:23 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

If I could do it without spending a dime__now that would be the day.
nice write my friend, maybe we'll run into each other seeing we both
shop/stop at Wally World.

Lucky Dale
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32 posted 10-08-2002 06:39 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(giggles in delight) How about tomorrow night we stop in at the Cracker Barrel and play some humongous checkers and mess with the jukebox and play with those Balsa gliders and play around with the rocking chairs and pretend they are rocket chairs! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, have a fun time, might wanna bring just a couple dollars after 10:00 when everything gets blue light, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BloomingRose
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33 posted 10-08-2002 07:02 PM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

LOL!!!
I think my trips to Wal Mart
will never be the same!
Even waiting in long lines,
will no longer drive me insane.
I'll always think of you...
and find a way,
to be amused!

Deb
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34 posted 10-08-2002 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Miss Behavin'..if that's your pic you need more than Wal-Mart to get a date!

Mysteria...you can eat and shop at the same time at E-Bay!!!

Larry....Super Wal-Marts are king!!!!!!!!!

Toerag....look forward to? I'm there now!

Enchantress...I'd love to! We could make those prices drop!!

passing shadows..when the security guards come up I just say "No speake spani!!"

lucky....I'll be outside riding the mechanical horse!

Noah....you BELONG in a cracker barrel!! LOL! I can never get those tees in the right holes!!

Deb...thanks! A lot of people get amused thinking about me...especially my ex-wives! I appreciate you...
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


35 posted 10-08-2002 11:22 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Balladeer - wait for me now, I'm coming to Wal-Marts, Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooo!!

BC
Miah
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since 08-26-2002
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36 posted 10-09-2002 12:20 AM       View Profile for Miah   Email Miah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miah

sigh, I love Wal-Mart!  But in my area it's pretty much the only place around to shop.
Madame Chipmunk
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37 posted 10-09-2002 05:51 PM       View Profile for Madame Chipmunk   Email Madame Chipmunk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Madame Chipmunk's Home Page   View IP for Madame Chipmunk

Its Friday night at Walmart
and in the pet department
they're selling furry chipmunks
with underground apartments

rodents reading poetry
oh what a fascination
cheekpouches swaying to and fro
in grand hallucination

its Friday night at Walmart
lets all hoot and holler
they're selling nuts and acorns
for ten cents on the dollar

I love the life that you put into your poems, Michael...  they're like true folk songs
~ Walmart chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel
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38 posted 10-09-2002 05:59 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Mr. Mack,
I worked at a Wal*mart,
in the shoe department no less,
for four years during summers
to help pay for college.

I *hated* customers like you.

Loved the poem, though.

Mikey
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Riding


39 posted 10-10-2002 04:40 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Oh brother, how much of my life is that? lol! I've become the typical Wal-Mart University student who goes there at LEAST once a day. *grins* I love this one!

A toque IS a hat! And I have one!

Marsha
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40 posted 10-10-2002 04:21 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

'Deer dearest heart you know I never knew such a divine place exisited till I came to these shores, but having discovered it along with Denny's I am as happy as a grig. And since they are side by side here I know how to get there and get back to the villa what more could I want.

As always you write divinely and I love it, and YOU just knew I would. Truly wonderful writing I love it utterly utterly utterly.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Justbleu
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41 posted 03-05-2003 05:46 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I just sent this one to a friend of mine who's been working at Walmart for about 3 months or so.....You 'Deer are a riot!!!!  LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

Bridgette
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42 posted 03-05-2003 06:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

LOL! Thanks, Bridgette! WALMART RULES!!!!!!
 
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