an abstraction of inner thoughts

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Open Poetry #22

an abstraction of inner thoughts

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2002-10-06 12:26 PM

The words fell to dust.

I itch to wish desperate moments away.
In dreams my touch renders everything strong,
absolute,  unlike this weary existence that falls,
softly.
My attention seems to be revolving
around belligerent abhorrence.
I can’t understand it.  Maybe I chose this
pathetic rendition of a muse distraught.
The trials of woe have caught my tears and
bonded earthly visions into
streaming soliloquies.

I can’t name
the horror which roughen hues upon
a door.
A glowing rubric emblazes an
elaborate fallacy, mingling the irony of
presumption and time
revealing.
s l i p p i n g
Numb deliriums adorn chapels draped
with the ghosts of hollow trees.

Iridescent shadows strain to chase
and delight in the memories of sight.
Nothing can replace this. No time will do justice to the glory
Of grace dispersed.  This poem can’t explain the
Emptiness,
  For wind blows enigmatical in all manners
unknown.
Poems can’t justify the
sorrows of wind
Blowing through caverns

Gone tomorrow, hollow.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-06 11:35 AM

they may not justify them, but they may certainly soothe them, providing a balm. They may help make some kind of sense of them ironing out misunderstandings, bringing clarity to cause and victory to combatting them.

Quite a poem...these feelings have been displayed well within your weavings.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-10-06 12:27 PM

I do agree with you, of course; i think writing is among the grandest mediums to express and give merit to feelings. Sometimes though... it's overwhelming.

Thank You !

O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song...

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-11-15 09:37 AM

a delicious abstraction this was, my friend.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-30 03:05 PM

me too

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-11 01:20 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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