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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-06 12:01 PM



The rules of light are thus.
It must penetrate the dark
and illuminate the corners,
to dispel the demons of dark
that lurk in crease of wall.

Unless, before light
lies obstruction.
Creating shadow too thick
and deep of black.
Thus blast of light
finds not slight of crack.

Leaving the corners
to hold imagination
within the dense
of absent light.

WhiteRose 10/05/02


"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-06-2002 12:02 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

1 posted 2002-10-06 02:08 AM


I enjoyed this playful tongue-in-cheek poetic art lesson.

Good show!
Thanks for sharing!

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-10-06 04:48 PM


Thank you for your response Radrook
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