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DaMusicMan
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since 2002-10-03
Posts 18
Virginia, United States

0 posted 2002-10-05 01:57 PM


"This Is Just To Say"

I know I’m privileged
Living where I live
Is a definite privilege, in itself
You can’t believe I ask to go to
The same place every weekend
It’s “crazy,” you say
Well, I’m sorry I love someone
So FAR away, It’s YOUR fault
Maryland is where we should have stayed
But you got this new job and became a jerk
And I sit and wonder everyday why nothing works
Out the way I want it to
You don’t have to yell
Just to tell me
I’m privileged, I know


- Errick

© Copyright 2002 Errick - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-10-05 02:34 PM


Interesting write. Welcome to Passions.
Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2002-10-05 04:22 PM


Errick0 Lovely poem. Welcome to piptalk.

Keilly

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