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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-10-05 12:15 PM

Please, be patient
with my beating heart,
for it did not have
a very strong start,
and the connections
have never been strong
enough to be
fully recharged
merely by good intentions.
I needed much stronger bonding,
but it never happened.
So now and then
when you think I'm dead,
please be patient.
I am just resting
and recharging as best I can,
for I intend to keep running
a while longer.

Please, just be patient
with my beating heart.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-05 12:24 PM

Midnitesun
Take all the time in the world. LOL
Wonderful write, enjoyed

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-10-05 01:07 PM

very emotive writing..enjoyed!
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-05 01:15 PM

Shove over luv! Make room for me to lie down next to you and we can recharge our hearts together. (That didn't come out right!) We can exchange war stories!---They say misery loves company! hehe

With this poetic plaintiff plea, you expressed yourself so gently with a hint of what it is that has been keeping you out of commission for awhile. Before you know it, your batteries will be so charged that you'll be able to turn the moon into the sun at midnite!

EA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-10-05 05:31 PM

You know, Kacy, I came across this at a very good time...just now! Thanks for this...it may have spawned something...[go ahead, say it...] Thanks!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2002-10-05 06:50 PM

Sy, thanks. I'll take my time!
Cher, thank you dear poet, for being here.
EA, thanks for your heartfelt friendship!
Sunshine? happy spawning.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2002-10-05 07:01 PM

This is what makes a poem when a person relates ad is put to tears. beautiful write.

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-10-05 07:28 PM

Kacy,
No way!

You mean your energize bunny failed?! Holy cow...use the camel.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-10-05 08:23 PM

Kellie, thank you, but please don't cry.

Larry, have you got a spare battery?
The camel is on vacation.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

9 posted 2002-10-05 08:49 PM

enjoyed

Midnitesun

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Gaia

10 posted 2002-10-05 08:56 PM

Hello Vandana, so nice to have a visit from you. Hope all goes well for you in your homeland. Peace to you.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-05 09:32 PM

Hello, Midnitesun (I LOVE that name). I enjoyed your poem. Very good. I hope all is well with you......

Best Wishes,
Ethel......garysgirl

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-10-05 11:52 PM

Hello, Ethel, and thank you. I am OK. I think we all need a recharge now and then,
emotionally and physically.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-10-07 12:31 PM

Very nice...James

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

14 posted 2002-10-07 12:37 PM

This is very good. Lord knows, my heart could most certainly do with some recharging. Sometimes I feel like I'm on E! But poetry like this is what brings me back up. Thanx for sharing.

~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

15 posted 2002-10-07 12:43 PM

James, thank you for visiting this too-weak poet.
Krissie? remember the song 'Runnin on Empty'?
this is a good place to hang out, empty or full.

Thanks for the reply!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

16 posted 2002-10-07 03:37 AM

You are so right. We do all need a recharge now and then, emotionally, physically and 'spiritually'...
You are in my prayers. Love your writing.

Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

17 posted 2002-10-07 10:47 AM

Thank you so much, Pat. This place always gives me a jump start.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

18 posted 2002-10-07 01:38 PM

that's my middle name
patience with a great big P
your heart is precious

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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