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Youth's Legatee
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Youth's Legatee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Youth’s Legatee There was a path I walked upon In my youth and now long gone. A rainbow path of colored hew Of candy dreams and misty you A valley filled with daffodil With singing of the whippoorwill And Spanish moss in nightly toss With fireflies that lit the course With moonlights silver snowy flare And golden glint within your hair, With dancing leaves in make believe And touch less touch of hearts receive I’ve found the path I knew was there And everything is still as fair You have not changed a moment’s store Your beauty stays forever more. You are my youth’s legatee the Forever of my youthful see |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a beautiful spirit you have--so tenderly loving...my. It's such an odd physical sensation to feel warmth through goosebumps.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In this morn of October air I find this poem, a bit of fair a cooling breeze to give some ease just know, please know, I'm ever pleased... Good morning, Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Only you could think of something like that to say.  Sunshine, And I too. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhhh... what a wonderful walk! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Munda for the read and reply. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A valley filled with daffodil With singing of the whippoorwill And Spanish moss in nightly toss With fireflies that lit the course With moonlights silver snowy flare And golden glint within your hair, With dancing leaves in make believe And touch less touch of hearts receive ======================================= Ahhh my prince of imagery...your gifts are shining in every word of the lovely lovely poem. Stinkylove this is beautiful!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You braid rhymed rainbow strands in my hair you paint Eden's gate ... then take me there. You hang the moon, dusking the day down to done ... then you dawn the day's begin with golden rise of sun. Your spirit shines in every verse and line ... and my view of your hue is oh so devinely fine.  *winkie winkie*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My mind has sipped the rye of your sky And dizzied on the spirits high And fragile wings of rhythmic rhyme Allows this flight but for a time. Thank you part of a new poem. WWRS |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, your work is such a pleasure to read. Such music to my mind. Thanks bunches. Love to all, Ethel/garysgirl |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
spellbinding...one of the most beautiful poems I've read in a long time. Soooooo touching! Thank you. without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you so much for the read and reply. regards2you So glad you got to read this one, thank you. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
With moonlights silver snowy flare And golden glint within your hair, With dancing leaves in make believe And touch less touch of hearts receive Enjoyed this Seymour, very tender. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy! How on earth did I miss this beauty??!! Well, I'm here now and this one truly is a beauty. ~Nite hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Darn! Janet Marie took the words right out of my mouth!!!  Well done, Sy... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, though a little bit more water has been under your bridge....I do understand this well....have felt it many times....Only difference is you said it so eloquently.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
brian, I thank you much. Enchantress Day and night hugs, I am happy. Balladeer, Now that would be a first. LOL Magnus I thank you for the kind reply my friend. |
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