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DaMusicMan
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0 posted 2002-10-04 10:14 PM


"Riding Along This Wave of Love"

Cure the blindness for me to see love
I finally know what it is, and was
I can live my life knowing
As I smile with a look of glowing
on my face, not a disgrace.
I can show off how happy I am
And to the people who don't know what I mean
Your time will come - If not, Damn.
I'm sorry, I'm only man - Not machine
Love can never be taken away
You might drift apart, but you know it's there to stay
Don't forget your friends, they were there first
But when you find this new kind of love, you get a thirst.
You want more, you can't have it.
They might want to slow it down, you say "Damnit!"
Leave me not, you will do
I'm glad I have someone like you.
Take a risk, put out your wrists
Be pulled along, this ride of love
No matter what, you can't give up the glove
I love you more and more each day
This is one hell of a way
To live life, to the fullest extent
If all forsakes you - Repent, repent, repent.


- Errick

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1 posted 2002-10-04 10:22 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful sensitive poem, sweet friend, do whatever it takes always to hold onto love for it can never disappear and is worth fighting for! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Errick, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-10-04 10:26 PM


'This is one hell of a way
To live life, to the fullest extent'
An excellent line, Errick.

DaMusicMan
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3 posted 2002-10-04 10:47 PM


Don't worry, I've got lots more where this came from.

Hi, the name's Errick. You'll be seeing me a lot.

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4 posted 2002-10-05 06:54 AM


Love this ride.....thanks for sharing!

Charisma

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