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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-10-04 09:03 PM


Born in your image, Lord....

Yet...each day, I look into my soul and....
I feel ever so small and unworthy of your image...
For, Our Creator’s image is far more
than this humble man’s can be..

Why Lord?  Why this small, insignificant human
should carry your image through a life of pain,
humility....of sinfulness and shame...

Of despair and desolation....
My worth, a mere grain of sand
compared to your image...
your gift to us, our world...

Lord, the day I was born, breathed my first
of many breaths.....such fear...
Why would one bring a child into the
world with the fear of being torn from
it’s mother’s womb...into the stark
reality of the world....crying...
Screaming out....unable to speak one word..

If only I could have....have been able to
speak.  Lord, I would have asked of you...

Why?  Why was I born into this world...
Naked, scared....in your image...
To grow, to sin, to experience many
countless failures....

Grasping a thin straw of faith....
When the only image of you I see....
is me..........

Why?

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-04 09:24 PM


So beautiful.I'm at a loss for words.....something unusual for me. Very touching poetry. thanks for sharing.
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2 posted 2002-10-04 09:26 PM


Very beautiful and touching Barry.
Serenity's challenge was well met.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-10-04 09:26 PM


Magnus
A wonderful write and I have asked the same question.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-10-04 09:41 PM


A brilliant light...with every question, He gives an answer. Thank you for this one Barry. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-10-04 09:58 PM




(smiles) Yes, He holds an answer for all and His love will never fail and will do us all great justice! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-10-04 10:07 PM


This was written by a humble man---not an insignificant one. Both you and your poetry are very notable, dear Barry!

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-04 11:33 PM


Heartfelt. Thank you

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