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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-10-04 02:11 PM


                Someone Like You  

All my life I have longed for someone like you
A man who is tender, sincere, and giving a love so true
You are everything I've ever wanted, all rolled up into one
You are to me, the greatest thing under the sun
I love you, my love, with all of my heart
Though it may be hard to believe, our love began right from the very start

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-06-2002 04:08 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-04 02:15 PM


Hey, I need help!! The first line wasn't on the title line  when I entered it. What did I do wrong?!? Help!!! Ethel
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2 posted 2002-10-04 02:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a  gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it, we all wish you loves true happiness always! As for needing help, if you notice the toolbar above your message, you will see an icon that says "Edit Message" which is the second one from the left. Click on it then edit your message and press "Submit"! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ethel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-04-2002 02:19 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-10-04 02:29 PM


Thanks for your kind reply and for your help, too!! It is greatly appreciated! Love to all of you. Ethel
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4 posted 2002-10-04 02:31 PM


Ethel, this is a beautiful first post and welcome to passions!   Your edit button will allow you to fix anything you need to.  Hugs.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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5 posted 2002-10-04 02:44 PM


Thank you, Gentle Spirit. Maybe I can fix it next time. Love, Ethel
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6 posted 2002-10-04 03:28 PM



Ethel, I "helped you out" if you don't mind, and you'll learn how to edit, I am sure, because Passions needs someone like you!  Welcome, and please!  Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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7 posted 2002-10-04 03:34 PM


Thank you  SOOOO  much, Sunshine. The  out of line thing was bothering me. Yes, I hope that I will "learn to edit". Thank you for your kind words. I  LOVE  this sight. Everybody is so nice!!! Love to all, Ethel
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8 posted 2002-10-04 03:51 PM


I envy you.  I hope someday I will find something as precious as you have.  Cherish it as I know you do.  I love the poem.  Thanks for sharing.

"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

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9 posted 2002-10-04 04:02 PM


Thank you, Stephanie. I feel very blessed to have my Gary in my life.
Sunshine, I love the e-mail!!! Thank you very, very much.
Love, Ethel

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10 posted 2002-10-04 04:23 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
What a wonderful first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

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11 posted 2002-10-04 06:42 PM


Thank you, Nancy. You are all so sweet. I really appreciate all of your kind responses. Like Sunshine said, this really is a "family", isn't it? I wish I had found this site sooner. Everybody should know about this site and see that our world  STILL  has  a lot of good, kind-hearted people in it. I am really grateful for the chance to share some of my feelings, through poetry, with all of you. Thank you all so very much. With Love From Ethel....garysgirl
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12 posted 2002-10-04 07:42 PM


Nice writing...nice to see that good things are happening for you...James
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13 posted 2002-10-04 08:43 PM


Welcome to Passions...and thank you for your
generous reply to my poem...

Your own is a joy to read....the love and
the enthusiasm flow from your words...

Yes, this is a family....welcome to it...

Magnus/Barry

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14 posted 2002-10-04 08:59 PM


Thanks, James, for your kind words. I enjoyed your work I've read, too.  

Magnus/Barry...Thank you, too, for replying to my poem. Yes, I'm so happy that I found this wonderful family of friends. All this is amazing to me. There is so much love and concern in everybody's comments and reply's to each other.....such sincerity!!

You all are making me feel   S000000  welcome.                  

  Love to all of you...Ethel/garysgirl

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15 posted 2002-10-04 10:22 PM


Welcome, and congratulations on finding such a gem of a love!
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16 posted 2002-10-04 10:30 PM


Thank you so much, Midnitesun, for your reply. Oh, yes, Gary certainly is a gem!!!!  Love, Ethel
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17 posted 2002-10-05 12:35 PM


exactly what i expected from the title!

welcome to passions.

Christopher

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18 posted 2002-10-05 06:23 AM


Your love shines through every word.
Welcome to Passions.

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19 posted 2002-10-05 09:37 AM


I'm about to make an assumption solely based on your pen name...I hope Gary reads this wonderful love song...and knows how much he is loved by Garysgirl!!!  

...believe what your heart feels.....

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20 posted 2002-10-05 10:21 AM


Christopher, thanks for your welcome to Passions.

Munda, I feel my love so real. I'm glad it shines through. Thank you.

Scorpio, your assumption is totally true!! Yes, Gary reads my poetry and knows how very  much I love him. In fact, he's the one who keeps encouraging me to send my poems in. He loves poetry, too, and is much the romantic, Thanks to you all for welcoming me into your family of friends!! I love all of you!!

Love,
Ethel..garysgirl

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