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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-04 04:36 AM


Why

We didn't work out
and I don't know
why.
Yes...you do know
why.
You know all the
reasons.
And if you don't
know them all
you know most
of them.
Because most of
them point to you.
So don't even
try to say you
don't know the
reasons why.
This is a lie
I will never
let you buy.
Simply said...
You are the
reason why.

JamesLee
Oct01
2002

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-10-04 10:15 AM


Ouch, okay I take it back that everything you write is sweet. This tells it just like it is though. Nicely done!
Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-10-04 10:27 AM


To the point. Nicely done!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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3 posted 2002-10-04 04:38 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is so wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, I love it, and may true love always understand why and how and fulfill all your hearts needs, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-10-04 07:47 PM


Thank you White Rose, Kris and Noah...I dirested this to myself...James
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5 posted 2002-10-04 08:17 PM


OOOOOOOh-h-h.....I hope you feel better. You sure did get to the point. You are a very good poet. I hope you will find true love soon and that both of you can work together to make it work. It's never just one-sided, remember. Best Wishes, Ethel
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-10-08 04:41 AM


Thank you Ethel...this happened a long time ago on a cold dark night...really it is way in my past and it took me quite a while to see how I failed in this relationship...at one point when I was able to tell her that I was a jerk she was able to understand why we had so many problems...but don't get me wrong I am not a jerk now...I look at myself as three people...who I was...who I am...and who I can be...and hopefully I am always progressing towards who I want to be...James
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