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Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-10-04 02:44 AM

Today:

She lies in glaring light

alabastered ivory goddess
Blue contoured on white sand
Queen of all she surveys.

Today she
dazzles  me
a mortal

Today I envy the sands
that
cradle

The restless sea
that surges
like a
tethered stallion in heat
against her thighs

Today I wish myself a
billowing cloud
above her
granting her shade.
or
a cooling mist
alighting
unnoticed upon her sunlit skin.

today she is
iridescent
Sunglassed
Poised
and knows the
power of her grace.

Tomorrow
I will be here again waiting.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-04-2002 05:27 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-10-04 04:29 AM

what would we do without them...James

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-10-04 05:39 AM

Thanks for the synopsis.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-10-04 10:02 AM

I loved this. Great writing and your words painted a wonderful picture in my imagination. And in my humble opinion, that to me is the sign of a good writer.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-10-04 10:22 AM

nice imagery Rad... you paint quite a scene..

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-10-04 10:23 AM

As I read down the titles, I was so surprise to see one written about me! You can imagine my surprise and my pleasure. Then as I read it, I got the distinct impression that it was written for someone else! Oh, well, maybe next time! tehe

On a more serious note, this is one fine piece of writing! Very well done! I hung on to every word---with a little bit of envy of the object of your adoration and a lot more envy of the talent of the man who wrote it!

Very well done!

EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-10-04 10:23 AM

THIS....I like!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2002-10-04 11:58 AM

This is wonderful!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-10-04 12:12 PM

Sensual and panting write. Well done.
ThisDiamond

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-10-04 12:20 PM

"The restless sea
that surges
like a
tethered stallion in heat
against her thighs"

wow....loved these lines

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2002-10-04 01:07 PM

Nicely done, Radrook, superb flow...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

11 posted 2002-10-04 02:42 PM

Thanks you all for the positive responses.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-10-05 02:03 AM

Oh my goodness, the warmth in this just sizzles, above and below the surface.

especially this~~~~~~~~

today she is
iridescent
Sunglassed
Poised
and knows the
power of her grace.

Thank you for sharing the romance~~

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

13 posted 2002-10-05 06:16 AM

Wonderful and sensual write. Enjoyed!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2002-10-06 04:36 AM

This was soooo good. thanks for sharing it with us.
Love to all...Ethel/garysgirl

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